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Anonymous
10/14/22, 7:22 AM
I'm loving this! Can't wait to see more!
10/13/22, 3:51 PM
The gaslighting is really hot. Hope you run with this!
10/13/22, 1:00 PM
Soft for now, but looks very promising!!😍👍
10/13/22, 4:09 AM
So hot. Hope to see more of this story. If i wasn’t in a chastity cage i’d have been rock hard
Carus
10/9/22, 1:17 AM
It'd be amazing and 5* if the issue with using the wrong plurals gets fixed. As it tends to use "midshipmen" when it should be "midshipman". "Emergence" should be emergency etc. However that's really the only issue with it.

10/9/22, 5:58 AM
@[Carus](/user/show/10001298) Thanks for pointing out the midshipmen vs midshipman mistake. I completely overlooked that. Grammer and mechanics are the weakest part of my writing so I'm sure I'll (and others) will find more as it's reread. But I'm glad to hear it was still a good story

Anonymous
10/11/22, 6:44 AM
@[sirjocktrainer](/user/show/949652) how do u read said stories

10/11/22, 12:51 PM
I'm unclear what kind of story you mean by said stories? We weren't talking about any particular kind of story?
Oct 11, 2022
10/11/22, 5:10 AM
I feel like the "No Sex" tag here isn't quite accurate, since we do get a scene of heterosexual intercourse (even though it's so brief and perfunctory I get the sense the author was holding his nose while writing it).
10/11/22, 12:28 AM
Wow this was a bit darker than I’d hoped. I was hoping that Scott would find a way to reverse the spell so that Luke becomes Alex’s, as was originally intended. An interesting story nonetheless.

10/11/22, 4:06 AM
@[ls1999](/user/show/2758081) The story was always about Alex trying to change someone else with magic and getting changed himself so this was always his fate, but I have to ask, how is Luke being magically changed against his will not as dark as Alex changing himself by accident?
10/11/22, 1:07 AM
Every day I look to see if there is a continuation :):star_struck:
10/11/22, 12:39 AM
Loved the whole series. Definitely all possible.
10/10/22, 4:34 PM
Just because Luke did not cast the spell with Scott present doesn't mean he didn't cast it back at the ROTC barracks, without Scott being aware. That would tie up loose ends for Luke and also keep Scott from seeking (and, possibly, finding) help before he found himself inescapably in Luke's thrall. A couple more chapters showing us that someone who screws up is not the only one to suffer consequences would be a very military style lesson for Luke to teach Alex and Scott. Also, it would be even hotter if Scott was straight to begin with, not just transforming into a complete slave, but transforming from straight to gay at the same time. Perhaps, halfway through the change or so, he becomes aware of what is happening to him, but is too far along to do anything about his transformation. Just some thoughts about how this very hot story could be longer and hotter.

10/10/22, 11:02 PM
@[ControlMe](/user/show/2615973) And that was the threat Luke made when he held up a piece of Scott's clothing. But As Luke said he wants those who want to be broken and molded so it wouldn't really fit for him to do it. But yes that would be a way to add more.