Recent Comments

10/16/22, 7:30 PM
Oh I'm sooooo happy that this story continues! :star_struck: I loved all the chapters and I love this one!! Hopefully there are many more chapters of this story to come!! Thank your Dylan for continuing!
10/2/22, 9:36 AM
That poor god will be made into an animal of pleasure,this will be good

10/16/22, 6:17 PM
@[ForgottenCradle](/user/show/911705) :smiling_imp:
10/16/22, 6:04 PM
Ok, so Nick's ex might have used some magic on him and that caused "The Zone". Since she's messaging him so much, my guess is she's hoping to undo it, which will probably lead to them finding out about Deborah's spell. Though between both spells and Gwen's programming, i doubt she can actually fix anything. And we still don't know if the puppy obedience is something else entirely. Meanwhile Darius is losing more and more muscle/mass. Still rooting for these crazy kids.
Anonymous
10/14/22, 9:45 PM
Really excited to read more of this!
Lavender Lad
10/14/22, 7:06 PM
Hope the imam gets more involved with chafiq in the next chapters it could a sort of double brainwashing where the imam brainwashes chafiq into brainwashing. The grammatically weird Arabic in this chapter was a bit distracting though other than definitely looking forward to the set up you have here with chafiq becoming conflicted about what he is doing
Anonymous
10/14/22, 7:22 AM
I'm loving this! Can't wait to see more!
10/13/22, 3:51 PM
The gaslighting is really hot. Hope you run with this!
10/13/22, 1:00 PM
Soft for now, but looks very promising!!😍👍
10/13/22, 4:09 AM
So hot. Hope to see more of this story. If i wasn’t in a chastity cage i’d have been rock hard
Carus
10/9/22, 1:17 AM
It'd be amazing and 5* if the issue with using the wrong plurals gets fixed. As it tends to use "midshipmen" when it should be "midshipman". "Emergence" should be emergency etc. However that's really the only issue with it.

10/9/22, 5:58 AM
@[Carus](/user/show/10001298) Thanks for pointing out the midshipmen vs midshipman mistake. I completely overlooked that. Grammer and mechanics are the weakest part of my writing so I'm sure I'll (and others) will find more as it's reread. But I'm glad to hear it was still a good story

Anonymous
10/11/22, 6:44 AM
@[sirjocktrainer](/user/show/949652) how do u read said stories

10/11/22, 12:51 PM
I'm unclear what kind of story you mean by said stories? We weren't talking about any particular kind of story?