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10/21/22, 3:40 AM
Ready for the next chapter!!! Nice work so far!!!
10/19/22, 2:37 PM
I loved this very much! I appreciated the close look into both the personalities and the sexualities of Mark and Tim and I thought you built them up quite nicely as characters. Their family had personality, too, and it was a lot of sweet interaction, slowly building into character development for the whole family. Stories that are semi-pornographic, semi-story-focused are my bread and butter. I love writing them and I love reading them, and this very much scratched that itch! Thanks for this beautiful story.

10/19/22, 2:41 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Thank you very much, Soren! Your feedback means a lot! I was apprehensive it wasn't naughty enough for a story in a kinky site, but it seems it is good enough :-)

10/19/22, 5:22 PM
@[topdog](/user/show/913845) Maybe not for all current readers—but for future readership I’m sure it’s naughty enough! The way I see this site is as a place for original gay fiction that has mature elements (and, sometimes, no sex—see Brad Yetts). I write tons of porn-with-plot—a lot of plot. And there’s an audience for that, even if not all of them have found their way here. Stick with it and let’s keep populating the site with this kind of writing!
10/18/22, 8:46 PM
It's nice to see that Skippy got a break from the intensity of the past few days(?). It's interesting to see how he really leaned into the submissive persona. You do have a slight typo: "This one opened into a decent size bathroom. Nothing like Titans, and a bit smaller then Skippys" I'm assuming you meant to say Sparky's.
10/11/22, 8:42 AM
Definitely the hottest story I've eve read. Flew through the whole series, and shot a bunch of loads along the way. Thank you!!!

10/18/22, 2:22 PM
@[bbwhore2use](/user/show/10020632) Glad you enjoyed it all.
Evan
10/18/22, 1:43 AM
That didn't go where I was expecting and I thank you for it. What a great addition. I hope Spike is very happy along with his two bros. Hope things slow down for you so you can enjoy yourself. And all the better if that includes some writing. Thanks for posting another chapter.

10/18/22, 6:01 AM
Appreciate the support and kind words! :) I'll be honest: I surprised myself with the direction this story went. It still wasn't quite working with the initial draft, so I went back and significantly changed everything from the bathroom scene on. I added the supportive real talk with Mirror Chad, then the rest of the story naturally followed haha. Now it's surprisingly wholesome? In my gay kink? Never. Sadly, I think I'll be pretty busy for the foreseeable future. But when I get a good idea like this, it consumes my thoughts until I get it down in words. I will definitely finish this story, and more after that! Maybe with a little help from my friends Brute and Dozer haha.

Evan
10/18/22, 6:09 AM
@[Voxel](/user/show/10020010) I've found that I like some wholesome mixed in with my depraved mind control and submission. :) I hear that on the time front. If you do get the chance, you have a reader eager to see what Brute and Dozer help you achieve. Either way, thanks for the story!
10/17/22, 7:46 PM
I still maintain that the "lower class" (I have no idea how to phrase it, so my apologies) are just precious. I'm really interested in knowing how the delta twins became so close and so in sync. And of course, I want to hear the lore of the rest. Did they all meet Titan alone or they knew of one another, how the rest joined and what is the Titan's backstory. Can't wait for the next chapter!

10/18/22, 2:49 AM
You can just call them the subbier members of the pack. And I’m glad your enjoying it. I did jsit get chapter 20 published. @[easdf](/user/show/780823)
10/18/22, 12:55 AM
Just read the entire series, up through this one - straight through. Fucking amazing. You're a terrific writer and I can't wait for the next one!
10/16/22, 9:47 PM
Can't wait for more
10/10/22, 8:08 AM
Happy to see you back, Dylan. Can't wait to read more of your work.

Dylan
10/10/22, 8:10 AM
@[gaudi400](/user/show/195703) Thank you sir!

10/16/22, 7:32 PM
@[gaudi400](/user/show/195703) That is exactly what I've thought! Good to have you back here, Dylan!
10/16/22, 7:30 PM
Oh I'm sooooo happy that this story continues! :star_struck: I loved all the chapters and I love this one!! Hopefully there are many more chapters of this story to come!! Thank your Dylan for continuing!