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Anonymous
10/14/22, 9:45 PM
Really excited to read more of this!
Lavender Lad
10/14/22, 7:06 PM
Hope the imam gets more involved with chafiq in the next chapters it could a sort of double brainwashing where the imam brainwashes chafiq into brainwashing. The grammatically weird Arabic in this chapter was a bit distracting though other than definitely looking forward to the set up you have here with chafiq becoming conflicted about what he is doing
Anonymous
10/14/22, 7:22 AM
I'm loving this! Can't wait to see more!
10/13/22, 3:51 PM
The gaslighting is really hot. Hope you run with this!
10/13/22, 1:00 PM
Soft for now, but looks very promising!!😍👍
10/13/22, 4:09 AM
So hot. Hope to see more of this story. If i wasn’t in a chastity cage i’d have been rock hard
Carus
10/9/22, 1:17 AM
It'd be amazing and 5* if the issue with using the wrong plurals gets fixed. As it tends to use "midshipmen" when it should be "midshipman". "Emergence" should be emergency etc. However that's really the only issue with it.

10/9/22, 5:58 AM
@[Carus](/user/show/10001298) Thanks for pointing out the midshipmen vs midshipman mistake. I completely overlooked that. Grammer and mechanics are the weakest part of my writing so I'm sure I'll (and others) will find more as it's reread. But I'm glad to hear it was still a good story

Anonymous
10/11/22, 6:44 AM
@[sirjocktrainer](/user/show/949652) how do u read said stories

10/11/22, 12:51 PM
I'm unclear what kind of story you mean by said stories? We weren't talking about any particular kind of story?
Oct 11, 2022
10/11/22, 5:10 AM
I feel like the "No Sex" tag here isn't quite accurate, since we do get a scene of heterosexual intercourse (even though it's so brief and perfunctory I get the sense the author was holding his nose while writing it).
10/11/22, 12:28 AM
Wow this was a bit darker than I’d hoped. I was hoping that Scott would find a way to reverse the spell so that Luke becomes Alex’s, as was originally intended. An interesting story nonetheless.

10/11/22, 4:06 AM
@[ls1999](/user/show/2758081) The story was always about Alex trying to change someone else with magic and getting changed himself so this was always his fate, but I have to ask, how is Luke being magically changed against his will not as dark as Alex changing himself by accident?
10/11/22, 1:07 AM
Every day I look to see if there is a continuation :):star_struck: