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10/26/22, 10:16 PM
This was so damn hot, holy fuck. Love detailed excessive displays of man tits.
10/26/22, 8:14 AM
cant wait for the next one
10/23/22, 2:14 PM
No me gustó No se porque pero no me gustó
10/23/22, 8:24 AM
The worst thing about this story is that I have to wait to read the next chapter lol XD I am so invested in Nick and Darius's story at this point. It was hard getting to know more about Nick's family and what Darius's opinion on them and then not having the next chapter to look forward to! I'm getting so much more detail about these characters and I'm loving their relationship. Additionally, I loved learning how much Nick and his parents have golden retriever energy! I can't wait to have golden retriever Nick back :D My favorite parts are when Nick subconsciously craves Darius's attention. Whether it's asking him what's so funny with the whipped cream on his nose, or touching him all over in the middle of the cafe, or resting his head in his lap on the car ride home or wanting him to sleep next to him on his bed. I loved reading every single moment! I already want them to just be a lovey dovey couple with a D/s dynamic but I guess I'm enjoying this slow burn :') Also as a dominant bottom myself it's so heartwarming to see a character that I can identify with...I feel seen :) I really enjoyed learning more about the zone. I can't wait to find out what it truly is and how it completely works. I do hope that you don't choose to remove it from Nick! Really really enjoying your story! I check your profile almost every other day for an update! I hope we get to see another one soon!
9/9/21, 8:47 PM
Seriously hot. What a pity there is no chance of continuations.

9/11/21, 7:00 PM
@Doug Kent I understand, and I've had several requests for more chapters over the years, but I never intended this story to be anything more than just a one-off. I've got other ideas for stories, which I'll eventually set to print, and hopefully they'll be just as good, or better. ; )

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1/3/22, 5:14 PM
@snoopy Magic story, a real dream.. May we find all rubber slavers like him haha

10/22/22, 5:47 AM
Awesome
10/22/22, 3:49 AM
Such an interesting, complicated mess of a story. I am waiting with bated breath for more! 😛😛😛
10/21/22, 3:40 AM
Ready for the next chapter!!! Nice work so far!!!
10/19/22, 2:37 PM
I loved this very much! I appreciated the close look into both the personalities and the sexualities of Mark and Tim and I thought you built them up quite nicely as characters. Their family had personality, too, and it was a lot of sweet interaction, slowly building into character development for the whole family. Stories that are semi-pornographic, semi-story-focused are my bread and butter. I love writing them and I love reading them, and this very much scratched that itch! Thanks for this beautiful story.

10/19/22, 2:41 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Thank you very much, Soren! Your feedback means a lot! I was apprehensive it wasn't naughty enough for a story in a kinky site, but it seems it is good enough :-)

10/19/22, 5:22 PM
@[topdog](/user/show/913845) Maybe not for all current readers—but for future readership I’m sure it’s naughty enough! The way I see this site is as a place for original gay fiction that has mature elements (and, sometimes, no sex—see Brad Yetts). I write tons of porn-with-plot—a lot of plot. And there’s an audience for that, even if not all of them have found their way here. Stick with it and let’s keep populating the site with this kind of writing!