Recent Comments

11/3/22, 12:54 AM
Hey Darby!! Glad you're enjoying the successive chapters & ongoing storyline!! Also, pleased you're saving this chapter for bedtime-- Hope that you thoroughly ENJOY it!! BTW...I can ASSURE you that this is NOT the end....I already several chapters "waiting in the wings"... I'm just doing "some fine tuning" before I publish them!! Sleep well, my friend!!:innocent:
11/2/22, 8:41 PM
Saving this chapter for bed time but definitely hoping this isn’t the final chapter, .
11/1/22, 12:51 AM
You did such a good job of worldbuilding and kicking this off with a wonderful, immersive atmosphere. The creation of the question game had such an element of fae creatures and fairytales, like Rumpelstiltskin and what have you. I’ll be honest and say that those fantastical, immersive elements came and went for me — I think they could have been carried through the action a little more thoroughly to elevate the sex scene beyond the already high level it reached. Regardless, this story is an accomplishment! You swung for the fences, and your love of the craft of writing shines through. Excellent work!

11/2/22, 5:51 PM
@[Noam de Pluma](/user/show/1403470) Yeah, I felt like the question game would really add to the mystique and I’m glad you liked it! I really wanted to get that immersive vibe and have that carry people through the story—it’s only that last sex scene that I didn’t have time to perfect or even spiritualise. But I appreciate you noticing my love for “the craft of writing”—I wanted to make this something that was really truly good _work_, and I think for the time I had I knit together something that let my skill shine through. Thanks for reading! And may the following chapters contain much more spiritual sex…
11/2/22, 4:26 PM
nice opener! I hope you'll continue this, I'm very intrigued where this is exactly going. in the end, it's still the older brother that has got the dream dick, so how is this gonna play out? also, you can include the pictures in the story on here, too!
11/2/22, 2:49 PM
(I thought I did an Authors note at the end but I guess I did not, This story was commissioned by an old friend a long time ago and he lets me share it. I came up with all the ideas and actors and he wrote.)
CampletelyCrazy
10/31/22, 3:01 PM
Dang, this is probably the only kind of vore that I’m into. Hats off to you sir

11/2/22, 10:39 AM
@[Wishful Thinking](/user/show/958307) Thank you so much, I'm so glad you liked.
10/31/22, 11:04 PM
An original variation on the vore theme. Quite an interesting quick trip with maybe the promise of more to come. As always, wonderfully well written, you do know your themes incredible well and play around with them very creatively.

11/2/22, 10:39 AM
@[Essex](/user/show/909447) Thank you so much, it means a lot!
11/1/22, 7:12 AM
I'm not into vore, but this is a very imaginative take that's erotic as hell. Bravo!

11/2/22, 10:39 AM
@[Fingrfethr](/user/show/701382) Thank you so much!
11/2/22, 9:11 AM
The prequel to Snakes on a Plane we deserved. :grin: The idea of a whole tower filled with men all experiencing the same torment is delightful.

11/2/22, 10:39 AM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) So glad you love the idea 😍
Zai
11/2/22, 10:26 AM
Holy Butt Fuck'in & Cock Suck'in, Dude! This is one H🔥T and 'Sin'tillating tale of debauchery and hidden lust revealed! The way you've written Superman's dive into the world of wicked passions since chapter one for me reveals his truest, innermost self concerning his sexuality. Superman, aka Clark Kent is a natural born cock craving, cum guzzling bottom boi. Lex has brought out the Superhero stud's need to be dominated; both with words and actions. The once clean cut Kryptonian hero is now a dirty, turned out slut whore submissive, a true BITCH! Superman, aka SuppaFag, aka SuperQueer, aka Supercocksuker, etc, etc, etc, is now and will always be Lex Luthor's prime, grade A turned out Slave! I cannot wait for more of this orgasmic AU! Are you planning on bringing Batman into the story? I'd love read about Lex capturing the Caped Crusader as the superhero is snooping about. Then, oh then, the bald, supervillainous stud makes Batman his next hero to Be Bitched! I sooooooo imagine Batman in his classic physique hugging body suit with those Skin Tight briefs! And Lex eventually fucks Batman's mouth and ass with wild abandon. Unlike stripping the Superman out of his costume, Lex slits Batman's Speedo-like briefs right over his hole and then plows the sexy hunk hero into Neverland. Forever! As the hot villain bitch's Batman, he uses Batman's penchant for calling items Bat-? Like Bat-mobile or Bat-arang, etc. But as he's conquering another hero ass, Lex uses terms such as Bat-pussy/Bat-cunt, etc, further cementing his new, dominating hold on the Caped Crusader. Plus, Lex will then be able to gain access and control of Bruce Wayne's companies, holdings and monies. Thanks for sharing, Dude! You Rock!