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11/13/22, 10:42 PM
In Part 11 you mention that Rico and Python are "these two mega-Titan clones created by Luthor.". Does that mean Rico is Luthor's slave too or did he get put on payroll after being cloned?

11/14/22, 2:40 PM
@[anarchomegalomaniac](/user/show/907794) Hi Anarchomegalomaniac!! Thank you 4 the question--although it has not actually yet been revealed what/who are the sources for the DNA material Luthor dispensed/utilized for each clone (as of course, they're obviously different, since Rico is of Latino descent), Rico is NOT Luthor's slave, as he doesn't refer to him as "MASTER", but he does call him "Mr. Luthor", but Python is Lex's slave. Rico is an employee of LexCorp....Glad you continue to be astute & hopefully enjoying the story-- Keep the questions cumming!:stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:
11/14/22, 12:43 PM
I liked this story. There is a lot of potential in it, I hope there will be other chapters. You say that english is not your first language. Are you French ? I'm asking because you use "deceived" instead of "disappointed" (to translate "déçu"), which is a very common mistake made by us French people. ;)

11/14/22, 2:18 PM
@[Nephilim](/user/show/941196) A fellow french user ! X) thx , I'll try to remember it lol (and deceived in fact mean "trompé"...) Don't hesitate to correct me for any kind of errors, better safe than sorry ^^
11/13/22, 11:38 PM
Couldn't rate it too highly yet; not much has gone on. But I'm expecting to enjoy future chapters very much. Thanks for writing it!

11/14/22, 11:59 AM
@[meatheadosis](/user/show/9860) Thx for the review ^^
Evan
11/14/22, 1:58 AM
A great opening premise! Unique too. Looking forward to seeing where it goes. Thank you for writing.

11/14/22, 11:59 AM
@[Evan](/user/show/133763) Thank you ^^
11/14/22, 3:01 AM
I enjoy the premise hoping there is more. I think chastity could be a hot direction for this

11/14/22, 11:58 AM
@[Kodafox](/user/show/930890) You're reading in my mind sir :b I'll try to drag things a bit so maybe not in the second chapter, but probably in the third one
11/13/22, 1:25 PM
What a wholesome chapter! Nyx is definitely becoming my favorite, though I'm willing to guess that Oak is going to give a fight for that title is the next chapter. I remember that Ruby is a psychologist, but I'm not sure if we know that the rest of the pack do for a living. Can't wait to read the rest! P.S. you have a few typos in this chapter. They're really minor but I thought you might like to know... - "letting his head rest against the crook of his elbow against his chest" (at least I think there's a grammar mistake here) - "He’s been decently behaved but he’s got a ways to go" (way shouldn't be plural) - "And Alphas gonna try to see if my stud pup can give him a litter tonight" (you're missing the ' in alpha's and pretty sure it's supposed to be "his stud" not "my stud" since he is talking in third person)

11/14/22, 6:56 AM
Went and fixed those. Thanks!!!@[easdf](/user/show/780823)
11/14/22, 3:34 AM
I once wrote a story and learned something regarding massages. A masseuse is a woman trained or specialized in given massages. A masseur is a man that's specializes in this same profession. When I saw the title for this story, I instantly thought the author made a similar mistake that I did.
11/13/22, 11:54 PM
Looking forward to seeing where this goes!
11/13/22, 10:43 PM
Great start. Love stories with a collar. Can't wait!
Anonymous
11/13/22, 2:45 PM
Tolle Story. Mein Schwanz ist jetzt hart...

11/13/22, 9:23 PM
Das freut mich!