Recent Comments

BPB
8/26/25, 7:02 PM
Love the story! Kinda hope Markus becomes a son with Hayden too, im nervous he's gunna become like the guy outside.

10/3/25, 2:47 PM
@[BPB](/user/show/911643) That works too 🥰
8/24/25, 4:51 AM
I hope Markus can save Hayden

10/3/25, 2:46 PM
@[Sss-2](/user/show/10004965) I hope they turn Markus into a Daddy
10/3/25, 2:46 PM
Great Story Bovine!!! It’s hitting all the points of my Daddy mindfuck sex-cult fantasies.
9/30/25, 3:00 AM
You have Chapter 4 listed twice. I think the chapters made it feel a bit disjointed so maybe just remove them?

Jai
10/3/25, 12:42 AM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) Good call! Love your work, thanks for the tip!

10/3/25, 12:22 PM
@[Jai](/user/show/692615) Thank you. I try to be supportive of others best I can.
9/22/25, 1:20 PM
Interest? Yes! Please continue.

Jai
10/3/25, 12:42 AM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) On it! :)
Jul 26, 2025
10/2/25, 7:55 PM
Oh woooow this hit so many of my buttons! Extremely hot stuff. And they’re so cute together!
Sep 7, 2025
Elm
10/2/25, 6:40 PM
Bottom Orc?? Sign me up! What a lovely story :star_struck:
10/2/25, 11:44 AM
Amazing story! :) I just wish there was slightly more between the uncertain amount of time to show the resistance being beat down and the brainwashing taking over.
10/1/25, 11:19 AM
This is freaking great!! The fucking and the submission is fantastic. Yates fighting to control himself and master these new mysterious powers and be a good man is fantastic. And his war of wills and wits with Erame is excellent. Boy oh boy do I want to read more of this!! And maybe Yates will grow some kinks beyond pure sex since Max and Trent are so into it. 😏

10/2/25, 3:57 AM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) Oh yes, Max, and Trent, will be showing Yates and Declyn the ropes, to all of their enjoyment as he learns what it means to own three other men.
10/1/25, 10:51 AM
So hot rereading this!!

10/2/25, 3:46 AM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) thank you. I hope you keep enjoying it.