Very nice. Didn't expect him to be total kinkster already. Love the ending with the pull, so evil.

Yo, SuperDude! I live on the west coast, direct beach adjacent in a lovely but ever-growing community. We're not sunny & warm, yay... lol... I love the cold, and we actually celebrate our most natural commodity after the ocean; this being a once a year Fogfest. Soon, I'll be reading Chapter 21... I'm so teeming with butterflies a la stomach, lol. 🦋😊🦋😊🦋😊🦋😊🦋😊🦋😊🦋😊🦋

Well, well, well, well, well... Luthor victorious... for Now! However, as we should all know, magic used wrongfully or incorrectly can backfire. Watch your back, Lexie! So, as of chapters end, there's been a reset of sorts. One wonders if Lex could have had Jinx do all the enslaving with a few balls of magical light spells and a few million dollars? Perhaps? But the egomaniacal billionaire definitely wanted to be a hands-on sort turning all his chosen men-to-bois-to-slaves through his diabolical contraptions, drugs, etc. Lex truly enjoys the step by step processes of turning über macho alpha men into cock & cum crazed enslaved whore bitches. Now we readers get to imagine what comes and cums next. I hope Rico gets to truly create the perfect superhero slave-bitch for himself, aka Batman Maricona. Lex needs to get that delicious huge-dicked Latino stud to work the gorgeous billionaire pretty-boi superhero into a complete sub bottom who needs Rico beyond desperation. And if possible, could Rico fuck a fully attired Batman. Fuck the feared Dark Knight while he wears all his Batman costume. Slits the Bat's skintight briefs right over his mancunt when finalizes turning Bruce Wayne into the Caped Crusader Slut!? Great chapter, my friend. I enjoy all the surprise twists and turns. You're a marvel at conjuring up unique... curveballs, Lol! Ciao, my good pal, SuperDude! 😛👅😛👅😛👅😛👅😛👅

Look forward to the next chapter. Definitely a great start. Woof.

Looking forward to chapter two

An exciting beginning! A very promising premise. I like that toy didn't go straight to some form of mind control, but rather have the officer suffer some psychological torment, he so clearly deserves. Hope he gets what's coming to him! Would love to see him be forced to worship other pup's smelly feet, further degrade himself. I'm excited for the next chapters!

Much of a *DICKtator', Lex? Huh? Yeah, you bald, *albeit hot*, bastard stud! But I absolutely enjoyed the curveball lobbed by Rico right at Lex; nearly braining the head honcho, the lead man, the fearless leader, *The top dog Master!* Annnnnndddd, about curveballs, SuperDude? There were several, here, as you well now know. As you wrote, you shocked yourself with the curveball content of this chapter. However, the biggest curveball was that damn cliffhanger chapters end! You're just are an outright cock-tease, SuperLEX!!! *seriously peeved lol'ing...* Because is Rico actually proving himself a challenge to Lex as the #1 Master? I'm thinking... yeeeaaahhh... duh, lol!!! Not only did he unchain, uncage and uncollar SuperBottomBoi, without Lex Luthor's apparent permission, but you left us with Rico dicking *HIS* SUPREMA-MARICONA! And I bet That was without the Sir's consent, either! You packed a lotta drama here, SuperDude, a great Deal of *dun, dun, dun...* One major issue I have with Rico comparing his superhero boi-toys like apples to oranges. Because he thought that Superman was the stronger of heroes he bitched? Oh Hell, No Rico! I feel in many ways, both Superman AND Batman are equals. But! Superman has been in slave training to bottom for awhile, and he's been through the ringer of drugs, varied Special-K (Kryptonite), mental and physical indoctrination, etc, etc. But it took Bitching Pills, booze and some clever manipulating by Rico to bitch the Dark Knight. So quickly. The argument could be made that Batman gave up his mouth & cunt up to Rico far faster than Superman got cherry popped. On the coin toss, Superman is a Kryptonian and Batman human. So in certain ways the flyboi is stronger; then again apples to oranges... ... ... I called it, Bitches! I knew Zod was Python's daddy; of a sort, lol! Now I'm left to ponder - just who is attempting to build up a superhero bitch harem? As an aside note!? I'd enjoy Aquaman getting bitched, too! The blonde Adonis stud in his skintight green and orange costume that shows off the pretty-boi's physique. Especially his epic ass & bulge. Don't get me wrong, I think Jason Mamoa is a kickass, awesome Aquaman. But I loves me the classic blonde model Aquaman getting bitched. C & C, Sir SuperDude! 😎😛😉💣💥⚾️👅

Damn Spell check! That fracking program changes words outta the blue. I wrote - '...have one *of* our hung guys...,' not, '...have one *off* our hung guys...' *exasperated sigh* I *Dick*stinctly enjoy our word play, yeah? Oh, yeah! Loud lol'ing!!! Cheers, mate!

Yes! *happy fist-pumping* Chapter 22! Soon, oh so soon, 21, here I come! And you deserve fair and truly honest praise, SUPERDUDE!! I'm still wondering when my story will appear? 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

Extremely intense erotica. Loved the detail descriptions of the mental emotional and physical responses. The ending was a clever sensual twist. Will Julio return for another session? I would!