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12/5/22, 1:22 AM
Excelente...

12/5/22, 2:34 AM
@[Maxigay](/user/show/524184) Thank you.
12/4/22, 9:55 PM
Interesting and great start ! I hope Yates is also going to have some fun with his team-mates ! That's be hot...

12/5/22, 2:34 AM
@[HypnoPete](/user/show/14634) Well, I plan for Yates to get up to a few things with at least some of them, maybe not right away but at some point.
12/4/22, 5:39 PM
What an interesting start. Highly fun. Sooo can I say that I think it would be cool if our guy actually dominated the entity, like he mastered him rather than submitting to him. Oh, and you mention elements, may I suggest the great fun act of rimming. Have our guy play with asses before fucking them. Hehe But yeah interesting stuff.

12/5/22, 2:33 AM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) I'm glad you enjoy it so far. The push/pull between Yates and Erame is intended to be the primary conflict of the series so we will see some changes there. And I will keep rimming in mind when Yates gets his sexual desires expanded
Cock slut
12/5/22, 1:39 AM
My favorite new writer. I loved the writing of "from straight to bitch club" and this dumb jock roommate series has has a very similar and high quality. I love how Jon is still straight but still using Theo for his pleasure. Chapter 5 will easily ruin my no fap strike and I'm looking forward to it 😋
musclejunkie
12/4/22, 1:45 AM
I'm super confused. What just happened? was it a nightmare? What happened to his chest? Were his parents there looking for him? I feel like you intentionally created multiple paths to take with the story's writing but teased them with no explanation. It needs a lot of clarification, though I enjoy the style of it and how you wrote it out, it feels like I read your brainstorming vs. a finished product.

12/4/22, 1:52 PM
@[musclejunkie](/user/show/10019676) It is chaotic and disjointed because his mind is broken. No matter what you and I believe, for him all these events are real. They happened and will assimilate in his brain as memories, affecting his actions and loyalties.

12/4/22, 4:33 PM
@[Slave Darius](/user/show/530524) realy hot he will make a good Muslim slave fuck wish I had hypnofiles for slave like that would be hot
12/4/22, 2:56 PM
Very very hot.
12/4/22, 9:22 AM
Eager to see where this goes
12/4/22, 12:38 AM
wered thigbn is guys convertting to islam has tuned me on a lot lately want to have a harem of Muslim men
12/3/22, 6:00 PM
love to see lex have this dominance over superslave

12/4/22, 12:07 AM
@[curiousj](/user/show/10030564) Hey CuriousJ! Glad U R enjoying the storyline!!:sparkler: I told U if U were patient that the story would go in the direction that you desired (wink-wink)!!:smiling_imp: Stay tuned 4 more curveballs (& twists & turns, for that matter--LOL!):baseball: Gr8ful 4 your positive feedback & continued interest! ENJOY your weekend!:sparkles:
12/3/22, 7:55 PM
This was hot!