Recent Comments

12/3/22, 3:49 PM
Can't wait to read more. Such a hot story.
12/3/22, 12:25 PM
This story continues to be outstanding.

12/3/22, 3:15 PM
@[Darby Thomas](/user/show/10017156) Hi Darby!! So GR8 2 hear from you & THANK YOU 4 your positive comment!!:smiling_face_with_three_hearts: I'm THRILLED that you're continuing to ENJOY the storyline...:sparkler: I'm doing my BEST 2 keep it interesting/evolving with AS MANY curveballs/twists & turns that I can create!:smiling_imp: Again, SO GR8FUL for your continued interest & ENJOY your Weekend!:sun_with_face:
12/3/22, 11:58 AM
Sublime slow-burn induction, I really can't wait for more. And although I am usually very icky when it comes to coercion based on a position of power, you managed to not affect me at all with this, since it blended in perfectly with the hypnosis. Fantastic job, man. Only flaw I have to point out is that repeatedly starting the paragraphs with Brendan made it repetitive to read at first, but you fixed it later on, keep it in mind for the sequels!
Q
12/3/22, 7:33 AM
Fusing their bodies and minds would definitely be an excellent use of the Shifting Sands. Then you’d have 1 big lug and enough collars to go around
Q
12/3/22, 7:17 AM
Looking forward to some intense chastity orgasms!
12/2/22, 11:55 PM
This is an amazing take on the genie. Going freelance and taking a price is a great premise.

12/3/22, 1:39 AM
Thank you very much @[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763)! It’s a weird premise, but I’m glad it worked out.
10/20/22, 12:35 PM
Lavender Lad, thank you so much for your input. Can I ask you if would be so kind to help me with grammar?

Lavender Lad
12/2/22, 11:42 PM
@[Slave Darius](/user/show/530524) Sorry for the late reply! GGS doesn't always show me when someone replies to my messages Anyways moving on. both the activation and deactivation phrases are in a grammatically incorrect form the activation phrase shagalah Can be eitherشغلَwhich is male past simple form(he worked it/he activated it) or شغله which is male passive and as a word is mostly used to mean a person is engrossed in a specific task or is ruminating over a past event depending on context. Atfiah أطفيئه is imperative but the subject is not the person receiving the command, the word literally means in this case "close it" or "extinguish it". If you use a direct imperative Form(ishtaghelإشتغل and intafi'انطفئ) for these two words it would sound very unnatural in Arabic and instead the noun of these words would be used in this case tashgheel تشغيل and itfa' إطفاء (activation and deactivation) but if you want a direct imperative form i would suggest something more poetic as اشتعل ishta'el and انطفئ (become aflame and become extinguished) which would some more natural in this case but tbh i don't think anyone would care as i am probably one of the few people who speak Arabic as first language here lmao anyways good story
12/2/22, 8:52 PM
Hot. Hope more comes.
12/2/22, 6:48 AM
What a fantastic story! You do a great job setting up the seeds for the ending in the very beginning ("Wish for a sex slave" is one of the first things the genie says). The casual mentions of each client also hints at a whole world of possibilities (who was the old man, and what was the "tab" he owed?). And despite the undercurrent of tragedy--someone losing all free will--the ending remains oddly happy, especially with the revelation that SOME intelligence, like the ability to work a phone, remains. You hit the perfect balance in intellect loss, characters being morally gray, and a light tone with a dark undercurrent. Well done! :)

12/2/22, 7:41 PM
Thanks @[Feed Your Head](/user/show/1170832)! I’ll admit, I wrote the “sex slave” line just cause I thought it was funny… and then later I realized I could make it come true. As for the old man, my theory is that _someone_ has to pay for every change, and the genie is a bit of a sweetheart so he had the man “pay” for everyone having sex in the steam room by taking his old age and restoring him to youth. It was my way of showing that the genie isn’t all bad. “A light tone with a dark undercurrent” — I love that description.
Zai
12/1/22, 6:24 AM
*Dude*. *SUPERDUDE*! I got some catching up on your chapters! I've been hella busy and I plan on gett'in to reading all about who's gett'in butt-reamed and dick-sucked, etc, ASAP! So noooooooo, I've not fallen off the 👨‍🚀 of the 🌏... face of the Earth, Lol! Later, Oh Spa Luver! *Cum Facials, anyone*? 😀😁😂🤣🌍🌎🌏

12/1/22, 4:43 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) CIAO ZAI!! SO GR8 2 hear from U!!:sparkler: I have 2 admit not hearing from you this week had me "somewhat concerned" (I missed ya, Dude!), but I know that LIFE sometimes gets in the way which detracts us from our "personal pleasures":smiling_imp: Hope you're ENJOYING catchin-up on the various Chapters....hit me up with your astute comments/feedback...Lookin fwd 2 it!:monocle_face: Have a SUPA Day, my friend!:innocent:

Zai
12/2/22, 5:22 AM
@[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379) Hujambo, SuperDude! Yup, I'm not locked as of right now, but I'm so damn loaded you'll probably hear my roar of release the 5000+ kilometers from my home to Miami, lol! 👅👅👅 Later, Alligator!

12/2/22, 2:04 PM
@[Zai](/user/show/1897690) LMAO!!! C&C ZAI!! Dying of laughter at the thought of being able to "hear your ROAR of release" from your home to mine...:rofl: but, it's also actually kinda HOTTT!!!:smiling_imp: (now, U have me imagining "the shooting part" of the release, too!:sweat_drops: -- you know how I get about cumshowers!:cloud_with_lightning_and_rain:) Happy TGIF, my friend-- Hope your Friday is a Productive one!:innocent: