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12/4/22, 12:38 AM
wered thigbn is guys convertting to islam has tuned me on a lot lately want to have a harem of Muslim men
12/3/22, 6:00 PM
love to see lex have this dominance over superslave

12/4/22, 12:07 AM
@[curiousj](/user/show/10030564) Hey CuriousJ! Glad U R enjoying the storyline!!:sparkler: I told U if U were patient that the story would go in the direction that you desired (wink-wink)!!:smiling_imp: Stay tuned 4 more curveballs (& twists & turns, for that matter--LOL!):baseball: Gr8ful 4 your positive feedback & continued interest! ENJOY your weekend!:sparkles:
12/3/22, 7:55 PM
This was hot!
12/3/22, 3:49 PM
Can't wait to read more. Such a hot story.
12/3/22, 12:25 PM
This story continues to be outstanding.

12/3/22, 3:15 PM
@[Darby Thomas](/user/show/10017156) Hi Darby!! So GR8 2 hear from you & THANK YOU 4 your positive comment!!:smiling_face_with_three_hearts: I'm THRILLED that you're continuing to ENJOY the storyline...:sparkler: I'm doing my BEST 2 keep it interesting/evolving with AS MANY curveballs/twists & turns that I can create!:smiling_imp: Again, SO GR8FUL for your continued interest & ENJOY your Weekend!:sun_with_face:
12/3/22, 11:58 AM
Sublime slow-burn induction, I really can't wait for more. And although I am usually very icky when it comes to coercion based on a position of power, you managed to not affect me at all with this, since it blended in perfectly with the hypnosis. Fantastic job, man. Only flaw I have to point out is that repeatedly starting the paragraphs with Brendan made it repetitive to read at first, but you fixed it later on, keep it in mind for the sequels!
Q
12/3/22, 7:33 AM
Fusing their bodies and minds would definitely be an excellent use of the Shifting Sands. Then you’d have 1 big lug and enough collars to go around
Q
12/3/22, 7:17 AM
Looking forward to some intense chastity orgasms!
12/2/22, 11:55 PM
This is an amazing take on the genie. Going freelance and taking a price is a great premise.

12/3/22, 1:39 AM
Thank you very much @[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763)! It’s a weird premise, but I’m glad it worked out.
10/20/22, 12:35 PM
Lavender Lad, thank you so much for your input. Can I ask you if would be so kind to help me with grammar?

Lavender Lad
12/2/22, 11:42 PM
@[Slave Darius](/user/show/530524) Sorry for the late reply! GGS doesn't always show me when someone replies to my messages Anyways moving on. both the activation and deactivation phrases are in a grammatically incorrect form the activation phrase shagalah Can be eitherشغلَwhich is male past simple form(he worked it/he activated it) or شغله which is male passive and as a word is mostly used to mean a person is engrossed in a specific task or is ruminating over a past event depending on context. Atfiah أطفيئه is imperative but the subject is not the person receiving the command, the word literally means in this case "close it" or "extinguish it". If you use a direct imperative Form(ishtaghelإشتغل and intafi'انطفئ) for these two words it would sound very unnatural in Arabic and instead the noun of these words would be used in this case tashgheel تشغيل and itfa' إطفاء (activation and deactivation) but if you want a direct imperative form i would suggest something more poetic as اشتعل ishta'el and انطفئ (become aflame and become extinguished) which would some more natural in this case but tbh i don't think anyone would care as i am probably one of the few people who speak Arabic as first language here lmao anyways good story