Recent Comments

Anonymous
12/4/22, 8:47 PM
Such an amazing story, Derek! Thanks for this master piece!

12/5/22, 5:49 AM
You’re very welcome!
12/5/22, 5:31 AM
I actually liked part two better! I'm a sucker for a plausible, satisfying solution to an impossible situation.
12/2/22, 10:47 AM
Very good. I like it.

12/5/22, 3:13 AM
@Jonanator Thank you for sticking with us! Great to hear you're still reading and enjoying!

Jonanator
12/5/22, 4:18 AM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) No problem
12/3/22, 1:30 PM
Mouse deserves better. TT Rhys and Lemon are starting to question what's up with Jasper, that's good. But oh no, the other thiefs are in trouble 0_0

12/5/22, 3:14 AM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) <3 We are so mean to them sometimes but we love the characters so! Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts -- we really appreciate it.
12/2/22, 7:58 AM
So, so, so excited to read the next chapter. Thank you. I have been hanging out for a new installment for a while. This was worth the wait. What a fantastic chapter. Plot is making leaps and bounds and the characters continue to grow deeper and spread their web of connection. I hope Iskios turns out to be trustworthy. It'd be so nice if they all find a place together. You know, if the group actually can get back together again after all this. There's just so much in this chapter. I'm so curious about Mouse and just what is going on there and also totally creeped out by the clear and disturbing abuse from Aris on the poor lad. I'm glad he had a fun sex scene with a bunch of other pets to start off his stay. Especially since he's an indoor pet. Rhys and Jasper are just the sweetest. I love them so much and want them to be disgustingly happy together. Even Lemon has a heart! Even though his motivations are in keeping Rhys safe and well. The Greek Play was a surprise and a great expansion of the world and the culture. Love this world and really, really need to know what happens next. No pressure or anything... but pretty please? :)

12/5/22, 3:13 AM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) We're so happy to have you as our reader. Thanks again for reading through the draft. It's such a delight to hear your thoughts!
12/5/22, 1:22 AM
Excelente...

12/5/22, 2:34 AM
@[Maxigay](/user/show/524184) Thank you.
12/4/22, 9:55 PM
Interesting and great start ! I hope Yates is also going to have some fun with his team-mates ! That's be hot...

12/5/22, 2:34 AM
@[HypnoPete](/user/show/14634) Well, I plan for Yates to get up to a few things with at least some of them, maybe not right away but at some point.
12/4/22, 5:39 PM
What an interesting start. Highly fun. Sooo can I say that I think it would be cool if our guy actually dominated the entity, like he mastered him rather than submitting to him. Oh, and you mention elements, may I suggest the great fun act of rimming. Have our guy play with asses before fucking them. Hehe But yeah interesting stuff.

12/5/22, 2:33 AM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) I'm glad you enjoy it so far. The push/pull between Yates and Erame is intended to be the primary conflict of the series so we will see some changes there. And I will keep rimming in mind when Yates gets his sexual desires expanded
Cock slut
12/5/22, 1:39 AM
My favorite new writer. I loved the writing of "from straight to bitch club" and this dumb jock roommate series has has a very similar and high quality. I love how Jon is still straight but still using Theo for his pleasure. Chapter 5 will easily ruin my no fap strike and I'm looking forward to it 😋
musclejunkie
12/4/22, 1:45 AM
I'm super confused. What just happened? was it a nightmare? What happened to his chest? Were his parents there looking for him? I feel like you intentionally created multiple paths to take with the story's writing but teased them with no explanation. It needs a lot of clarification, though I enjoy the style of it and how you wrote it out, it feels like I read your brainstorming vs. a finished product.

12/4/22, 1:52 PM
@[musclejunkie](/user/show/10019676) It is chaotic and disjointed because his mind is broken. No matter what you and I believe, for him all these events are real. They happened and will assimilate in his brain as memories, affecting his actions and loyalties.

12/4/22, 4:33 PM
@[Slave Darius](/user/show/530524) realy hot he will make a good Muslim slave fuck wish I had hypnofiles for slave like that would be hot