Recent Comments

2/4/23, 9:44 AM
Love this, should be highly rated. Particularly enjoyed the Doctor character and how he gets off by enslaving the young men- the master of all he surveys, even if he isn't explicitly involved in the action he'll be standing there with a big old hard-on in his fine suit trousers as he watches the young men play. Long live the perverts!
2/4/23, 3:17 AM
oh man, what a great cliffhanger ending! I'm so excited to see what happens next
Jan 22, 2023
2/4/23, 1:43 AM
This is a fun story that engages with a somewhat uncommon kink. To me, the dental/orthodontia kink is so horny and you did a good job with it. The mind control sequence was interesting and fit into the story perfectly. You've obviously cleaned the text up from when you first published - I found only one small typo on casual reading: > He put on his gloves and asked Viktor to open. After checking his teeth he confirmed that they were misaligned, that affected his teeth aesthetically, but more importantly he had a bit of an overbite and that the mist convenient thing would be to get braces for his bite to work well. Viktor got nervous about the idea again. "mist" should be 'most'. Great job, story is enjoyable and hot.
2/4/23, 1:05 AM
I enjoyed both versions of this story. The realistic one was a solid one-hander; short in length but long enough to offer some good details and bring everything to the point you wanted at the end. The magical re-write was also a nice horny story. I felt like the transformations were a bit too fast and easy, but they were very hot. Having read your more recent transformation story (for the Secret Satan contest) I'm comfortable saying you are improving your descriptions of transformations which is important for that kink. As far as imagination and horny transformation ideas, you're already there. Just hang onto what your brain is already telling you because it's great.
2/3/23, 11:54 PM
I am really excited about this series.
2/3/23, 2:27 PM
Hey, just found this and am loving the strangeness you conjure up. I always prefer first-person narrative as it makes the characterisation more immediate. I can see this can go in several directions but however you take it forward Sam is falling love with the master magician, just hope it gets even wilder and more perverse on the way! Looking forward to the next chapter. Billy

2/3/23, 11:29 PM
@[Whitechap_e1](/user/show/219792) Thank you! What i love about magic stories is that you can really go wild with it. It's definitely gonna get more perverse XD
Gingcub
2/3/23, 11:35 AM
The wager element was a fun addition! Any chance of Rex joining Stanley in chastity?

2/3/23, 11:24 PM
@[Gingcub](/user/show/10000534) ;)
2/3/23, 6:10 PM
Hot as fuck love jock take downs
2/3/23, 4:31 PM
I already want the next chapter.
Gay Harem Official
2/3/23, 10:47 AM
@Bazir Give me your ingame ID I'd love to give you some rewards for your effort. :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

2/3/23, 10:49 AM
@Gay Harem Official Also, tell your club members to visit the site :wink:

2/3/23, 12:38 PM
@Gay Harem Official Ohhh Wow! really thanks so much for your will to give me some rewards i really appresiate that hehe, my ID: 723884 and again thanks for the effort on the game and the frequent update rate i currently are on the last digisekai quest and look forward for the amazing new adventures on that world hehe Note: i love Ace and even i consider him a good character as a Drone Material hehehe y love him being convert into an object previusly "The Pillow" and how he calls the hero "Master" Cheers up and continue like that!

2/3/23, 12:43 PM
@[Gay Harem](/user/show/10032681) Ok i will tell them they speak spanish but i will suggest them to use traslator if they don't know english for read here and they can discover this site and its stories and again thanks you very much if needed as i have state in the previus comment this its my ID: 723884 Thanks again again for your efforts in the game, cheers up and continue like that! :D

2/3/23, 12:47 PM
@[Bazir](/user/show/911833) They are allowed to use affection scenes and art from the game like your story :)

2/3/23, 12:58 PM
@[Gay Harem](/user/show/10032681) i see that good to know, also also thanks very much for the rewards!