Recent Comments

12/15/22, 12:00 PM
Fantastic, great character development.I can see where you are heading.
12/15/22, 11:46 AM
Great start, well told, look forward to reading on.
12/15/22, 8:32 AM
horny as fuck, if a little disjointed at times, I came hard!

Dylan
12/15/22, 9:38 AM
@[incaerau](/user/show/10017844) ;-) Disjointed? You mean you had to use your actual brain to follow some of the different storylines? I promise, it gets easier to follow in chapter 2 , and beefier in chapter 3
12/14/22, 3:44 AM
Great job! Coming up with all those rhymes couldn't have been easy.

12/14/22, 9:42 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) the hardest part was going back to the other story im working on and getting out of the habit of making every line rhyme XD
12/14/22, 4:57 PM
Goon Noob your a wicked genius lol.
12/14/22, 2:33 PM
I've read this entire story something like five times in two days. Just perfection. Really hope it's continued!
Dylan
12/14/22, 7:45 AM
Hilarious! I'm in love , 5 of 5 in any category and 5 in mind extra for the drawings ;-) Merry Christmas and a happy fuck
12/14/22, 2:16 AM
Outstanding! I didn't think the verse would work but you pulled it off much like Ru and the reindeer himbo cocks. What a fun ride. I hope Steve loves his new life. And well done with the art as well as somehow getting a rhyme story to still be super hot. Amazing.
SlaveForArab
12/13/22, 11:23 PM
Great story, please continue.
12/13/22, 3:12 PM
That was amazing. Can't wait to read that again after work. When I set out milk and cookies this year I may have to wait on the roof top with KY and poppers. Thanks for sharing a new time honored classic.