Recent Comments

12/29/22, 10:35 PM
I liked the story but would think a bit of resistance and some manipulation would have helped make this a hot story. Not having mind control is fine but I just think a bit of manipulation would have worked. Like he does a thing that makes Matt more willing to comply, for example with me it's have my ears nibbled a certain way. That and/or maybe using a little bit of guilt to get him to start dressing up and give him a reason to like dressing up and make Matt think he's manipulating the situation but it's really Oliver. Lastly it could be a situation where his clothing was "lost" in the move and he's stuck wearing his boyfriend clothes for a bit and is brought around to wanting to dress like this. That's just some ideas.

12/30/22, 12:42 AM
@[nerdysuitedbaby](/user/show/164769) Thank you so much for your comment and ideas, I will bear them in mind for the next part!

12/31/22, 8:38 PM
@[formalboy](/user/show/10030609) No problem just figured I'd give some advice.

Anonymous
1/4/23, 6:38 AM
@[formalboy](/user/show/10030609) I hope you're continuing the story - good intro
1/4/23, 3:43 AM
God I love this series so much! Like another commenter I hope Nick’s muscles aren’t gone for long but this chapter opens so much going forward and really makes me excited for what’s next! In particular Darius’ loss of inhibitions and the knowledge of exactly what was done to them make me look forward to how it plays out.
6/9/22, 7:28 AM
I'm glad I got a chance to read this! I love endings like this, it's twisted but almost wholesome somehow. Also the name Barkley is just *_Chef's Kiss_*

6/9/22, 12:45 PM
@Norismo Different strokes, I guess! When I read stories like this (and there are a great many of them, not picking on Artemis, I love many of his stories) I cannot escape the feeling that I'm witnessing a murder. The parts of the story that try to prop up the justification for the revenge always read like copes to me. "I was bullied." "he cheated on me." "he's a homophobe." Well yeah, and you're a murderer and that's worse so... is always my reaction.

6/9/22, 7:22 PM
@amul A lot of hypno stories are troubling if you allow yourself to think about them :sweat_smile:

1/4/23, 2:13 AM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) @[amul](/user/show/10003734) I am such a Gemini that i happily agree with you both! I prefer stories that don't involve murdering someone. On the other hand if a 'murder' doesn't actually involve death or dismemberment, and is done gently and there are enough hot kinks involved, like hypnosis, mind control, transformation, power exchange, etc., i can focus on the good stuff and ignore the rest as just fantasy. (The good stuff isn't fantasy, since i am hoping some of it might actually happen!) One potential compromise to this dilemma is hypnotic triggers similar to those Paul installed in Bradley that allow maintaining the original personality, as well as other 'modes' like the 'Barkley' mode in this story for example. Of course when you're dealing with an impossible storybook douche like Bradley, the writer certainly has the license to try to correct the situation. In any case i did enjoy the story, and would like to thank Artemis for sharing his imagination and writing skills.
1/3/23, 1:37 PM
the dilf... the coach! Please bring him back! I love this story. Your writing is so good and captures me!

1/4/23, 1:49 AM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Don’t worry dude, there is a lot more of Coach to come ;)
1/3/23, 4:29 PM
Loved it.
1/3/23, 6:09 AM
I'm really enjoying this. Love the masculine attributes of the characters. Total bromance all around. Hope to see more of the big bodybuilder-built coach :)

1/3/23, 12:37 PM
@[dredlifter](/user/show/1036044) Glad you like it! Chapter 3 is about Coach’s first erotic scene ;) and all about his body builder body! Get ready!
1/3/23, 10:25 AM
I love the stories with Caging Officers in them. And I love stories by SlaveBoyJG.
1/3/23, 8:44 AM
Hello Dylan, I am Bad Colin Baxter. I am also a big fan of your work. I can't think of anyone better to reboot the story of the sexy young Jock boy, Tyler. I am more than happy to leave his fate in your hands. However Mister Stalker is not as easy going as I am. I trust you will treat him well. He still has many ideas about how to deal with a hot boy like you, and I would hate to think what might happen to you if you were to upset him. I'm sure it will all work out fine though. 😏

Dylan
1/3/23, 10:03 AM
@[Badcolinbaxter](/user/show/10016611) Thank you for your reply, sir. I am glad you are well and read the story sir. If you or Mr.Stalker would like to help out with ideas and suggestions, i would be delighted to use any of them. Please feel free to contact me on boy18cute@yahoo.com, the email the Dickson Company set up for any admirer i might have. By now i work on chapter 3 and i would love to incorporate any pictures you or Mr.Stalker took of boys you work with. I will gladly answer with pictures of me. Tyler greets you and is looking forward to the future, excited what the help of the Dickson labs and Mr.Stalkers training will make possible for him.
1/2/23, 4:20 PM
Thank you all for the positive comments!! Chapter 2 is mostly done just needs some minor edits and proofreading! Stay tuned :)

Lampshade15
1/2/23, 8:00 PM
@[cheekyjockboy](/user/show/908783) Can't wait!

Chase
1/3/23, 5:36 AM
Love this story. Definitely reading anything you write from now on. Thanks and can’t wait for me 🔥😘
Anonymous
1/3/23, 4:38 AM
Hot, love when they are oblivious