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Jan 22, 2023
1/22/23, 12:20 PM
separating by paragraphs would be fine, it is illegible

1/22/23, 12:28 PM
@[Maxigay](/user/show/524184) Sorry, it's my first story here and thought pressing enter would add a line break. Now I've edited it to have the proper paragraph separations, but it's still being reviewed :)
1/22/23, 12:13 PM
This ticks all my boxes with latex, drones and a superhero turning bad -hope we read more soon
1/21/23, 5:31 PM
This was great! I’d love more about these characters!!

1/22/23, 6:20 AM
@[Bound_Up_Boy](/user/show/907887) Thank you, there will be more stories with Adam and Ed, and some other characters too!
Connor
1/21/23, 4:02 PM
thanks for painting such a hot picture. very sexy - nice writing...!

1/22/23, 6:19 AM
@[Connor](/user/show/10032837) Thanks!
1/21/23, 10:49 AM
Great story. I hope there’s a 2nd part with Adam and Ed or maybe the gardener to punish him for spying.

1/22/23, 6:19 AM
@[tanners92](/user/show/963694) There might be, but I should clarify that this series is going to be a gay erotic anthology with some multi-part stories, so this one might get a second part.
1/21/23, 7:21 AM
I gotta ask, where is that picture from?

1/22/23, 6:18 AM
@[Mordred](/user/show/913855) Unsure, got it from a random Tumblr post, but if you find the model let me know!
Bruce
1/22/23, 2:31 AM
Your a great writer I am looking forward to chapter 12
Connor
1/21/23, 2:47 PM
well, that helped me out with my morning wood! great story -hot & sexy - passionate & intense

1/21/23, 10:04 PM
@[Connor](/user/show/10032837) I'm glad it was both a great story and a great jerk-off session! Josh and I had a lot of fun fleshing out the relationship and therefore the passion. I always think that in order to have a really hot sex scene you need build-up that demonstrates the relationship and the sexual tension between the characters. Then you feel their need and desire with them. Hope you find more stories like this to do it for you!
1/21/23, 6:10 AM
God I love a slow burn corruption, and it seems paced very well. Got me hard already and can't wait for the next bit!
1/21/23, 2:43 AM
super excited about this story and where it's going! the dynamic between dusk and James was real fun