Recent Comments

8/22/25, 4:31 PM
This was very sexy! Love the progression and the commands. The dildo play is great. The whole nature of Travis seeing this opens the door for maybe him also participating. So yeah very sexy. I hope he gets hard from dildo play and being fucked, totally would be fun if his big hard cock gets hard when fucked and his hole is filled. So I have to admit while most of the commands are great, the one where it says that if anyone uses "good slut" he will obey and get fucked feels dangerous to me. Its too common of a phrase and you don't want any random person being able to switch him, not if you want him to be normal during the day and such. So this feels destructive. Anyway, yeah, fun and sexy and hot. Lots of potential in these days. Love the submission of Mike to Josh. Looking forward to other jocks participating and such.
8/22/25, 3:49 PM
LOVED it... but always a romantic at heart LOL
8/22/25, 2:24 PM
Sounds to me like he's working that hole getting it prepped for one hell of a pounding and maybe even fisting session.
8/22/25, 1:31 PM
Omg need more of Week 2 ASAP!!! Mike is ready for more. I'm wondering when Josh will bring more hunks into the mix...Travis definitely seems curious (wonder what he looks like). Hoping the next installment comes quickly! Thank you for your service
8/22/25, 6:27 AM
The methods used to establish dominance and control are much less relevant to me than the evolving slippery slope into total power exchange. Drugs, pheromones, hypnosis, and so much more are all good tools to achieve the desired brainwash and control. I loved both chapters equally, although both chapters had the same issue of being much much too short for my taste. Maybe i am easily addicted but when i find something i like, i want more or it!! I did wonder whether it might work better to switch the order of the chapters as it seems Teddy was enslaved first, and then presumably used to draw work colleagues like Byron into a similar enslavement scheme. In any case there is so much more to say about the nature of the clones and the background and ultimate goals of the Replica organization and its founders. Having been totally taken in by this story, my only real suggestion, more of a plea really, is that there be many more chapters as soon as possible. Thanks to noper for an exciting story, already hot but also with great potential.
8/22/25, 5:44 AM
Wow! Just wow! Like Anonymous i anticipated something along these lines early on, but the idea itself is certainly new to me and so full of potential for an arousing total power exchange, i was hooked immediately. The story as written certainly didn't disappoint -- incredibly hot!
8/22/25, 3:28 AM
Jack always makes a story that is totally believable. Eden Academy builds men.
Jay
8/22/25, 2:06 AM
The most incredible deflowering - not by Gray but a random "welfare" kid and livestreamed to 100k and continuing with a long line of random fuckers. Epic!
Mark
8/22/25, 12:38 AM
Judas Ring is one of my favorites from you ever. Can't wait for the next part!
8/20/25, 11:05 PM
LOVE this

8/21/25, 4:50 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Honestly, I wrote this mostly because I really like your stuff and and the old story "Wishes fulfilled" by Albatross

8/21/25, 9:32 PM
@[Slothyslothysloth](/user/show/1253105) I’m flattered!! I hope you’ll continue. Really enjoy this!