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1/30/23, 11:33 AM
You have been late, but it was highly anticipated, I hope to see the continuation of the Sergeant's transformation into his or her squad bitch. Fabulous friend, don't delay if you can...
1/30/23, 8:53 AM
There is something deliciously twisted about this ending. I didn't see it coming, but didn't have the negative reaction that some readers had. Yes, Rob is an abuser. But maybe Ryan's true love is meant to be Brute. Maybe his savior in this. A second chapter exploring that relationship would be worthwhile.
1/30/23, 12:28 AM
Was pleased to see a follow-up to the original. And just like that one this was short, to the point, and hot. :fire:
1/29/23, 8:52 PM
Absolutely BRILLIANT. Love the cuckolding scene so much and it was so great to see T & B get some space again. Genius stroke to have Luthor use them to humiliate Bash. Also caught that little Dick/Rico moment and dying to find out how that all plays out.

1/29/23, 9:55 PM
@[fanboi214](/user/show/908190) THANK YOU, Fanboi!!:smiling_face_with_three_hearts: THRILLED that U dug the cuckolding scene btwn Jason & Superman....the heat will DEF increase on the cuckolding on S-man when their 3-way heats UP!:fire: Yeah, I have 2 totally give MAD props 2 "a buddy" who inspired me 2 create that Luther/Tim/Bernard/Bash scenario...AHEM (look in a mirror!):mirror: Also hope you enjoyed how Tim exerted "some newfound dominance" 2 impress his Master Daddy Lex....:muscle: BTW....I had gotten 2/3 thru the story b4 I realized that I hadn't inserted any "addt'l sideline stories" 2 provide "some XXXtra spice":hot_pepper:... SO I created "the Dick/Rico moment" so I could E X P A N D upon it during the next chapter!:sparkler: THANKS 4 ALWAYS being SO SUPA-SUPPORTIVE of this story & being SO POSTIVE w/your comments-- VERY GR8FUL!:pray: P.S. I also have "another curveball idea":baseball: brewing up in my mind that might help Bash out of "his humiliation spiral":cyclone:...SO STAY TUNED!!:radio: Have an AWESOME rest of your Sunday/wknd!:sunglasses:
1/29/23, 9:37 PM
Love this chapter, Jack-- HOT!
1/29/23, 2:58 PM
Hi Jack-- Stumbled upon this riveting 2-part story yesterday/today & am hoping that you will return to (or expand) upon this Theo/Superboy dynamic!!!:smiling_imp: I have to admit there's something to the Theo character that is TRULY powerful/captivating.... especially when he methodically breaks Superboy down into a submissive bitch-- PLUS the whole humiliating collar scenario in Part 2 was absolutely BRILLIANT!!:sparkler: I know that you recently wrote about them in "Not So Super Now"....(which I RAVED about back in December!) but with your masterful writing skills, I'd agree with Essex (comment above) that you when you carefully create/craft these stories (esp. w/the particular Theo & Supes dynamic), you really leave us wanting MORE!!:supervillain: We can ONLY HOPE, right!?!? ENJOY Your Weekend & BRAVO, SIR!!:tada:
Dylan
1/28/23, 10:58 AM
Great story, quick and easy bringing a dummy to good use. Looking forward to more chapters, like "Billy tries new shorts" or "Billy at the principals office" and such

1/29/23, 12:59 PM
@[Dylan](/user/show/606612) Hey thank you for the ideas, they all seem great and I'm sure I'll enjoy making the stories. I'm currently working on a new character story, I'm halfway done with it. I hope you'll enjoy it too!
Chad
1/29/23, 2:49 AM
Need more…i have been waiting for the sequel to the first chapter and it did not disappoint. busted twice.. reminiscent of straight to bitch club 10/10