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1/30/23, 9:49 PM
*Raises hand*. I thought it was hot. Pictures were a nice addition.
Martin
1/30/23, 5:59 PM
Why is no one commenting on this story? It's a hot story, getting into the mind of a man who's slowly turned into an obedient and willing slave...
1/30/23, 11:10 AM
I'm starting to think we need a "ethics" rating categories for some stories (mine included). This is so hot, so exciting, but also so wrong !! :sweat_smile: I love this story, it is making me hard. (Seriously : I'm half joking half serious with this. I know this is fiction and all, but an ethic rating on stories might be a way to 1. partly describe the story 2. be used as trigger warning for people who might need it.)

1/30/23, 11:30 AM
@[Nephilim](/user/show/941196) Hi Nephilim! First off, I'd like to thank you for your honest feedback. I have a kind of blanket trigger warning in my bio since almost all of my stories are, well, problematic XD I'm writing about what turns me on personally and although i think we all know it's a fantasy, you're probably right that I should do more to warn people who find this kind of thing unethical. I'll take that onboard.

1/30/23, 12:50 PM
@[PuffDeamon](/user/show/10025400) Try not to take criticisms of your character's actions onto yourself. I am one of the people who complained about Marcus, but it was about him. It's a good story. The character is well-written. But he's a well-written sociopath and that provokes a reaction. It's not a criticism of the author, or even the story itself to have a reaction to a character like that. But yeah, a character who casually betrays, effortlessly lies through his teeth, sadistically strangles someone while watching them like a kid with a magnifying glass and some ants, and ruthlessly controls his "friend" all without ever having the slightest emotion is going to provoke strong feelings in your readers. You have to expect that. If you don't want to have a certain segment of readers who have shocked or upset reactions then you probably do need to put a warning in front of your stories. Personally, I don't think a warning is necessary - but you're also gonna get some reactions.
1/30/23, 11:36 AM
Just to be sure : That was not specifically against you. As I said, I love your story, style AND content. And others here are far less ethic.
1/30/23, 11:33 AM
You have been late, but it was highly anticipated, I hope to see the continuation of the Sergeant's transformation into his or her squad bitch. Fabulous friend, don't delay if you can...
1/30/23, 8:53 AM
There is something deliciously twisted about this ending. I didn't see it coming, but didn't have the negative reaction that some readers had. Yes, Rob is an abuser. But maybe Ryan's true love is meant to be Brute. Maybe his savior in this. A second chapter exploring that relationship would be worthwhile.
1/30/23, 12:28 AM
Was pleased to see a follow-up to the original. And just like that one this was short, to the point, and hot. :fire:
1/29/23, 8:52 PM
Absolutely BRILLIANT. Love the cuckolding scene so much and it was so great to see T & B get some space again. Genius stroke to have Luthor use them to humiliate Bash. Also caught that little Dick/Rico moment and dying to find out how that all plays out.

1/29/23, 9:55 PM
@[fanboi214](/user/show/908190) THANK YOU, Fanboi!!:smiling_face_with_three_hearts: THRILLED that U dug the cuckolding scene btwn Jason & Superman....the heat will DEF increase on the cuckolding on S-man when their 3-way heats UP!:fire: Yeah, I have 2 totally give MAD props 2 "a buddy" who inspired me 2 create that Luther/Tim/Bernard/Bash scenario...AHEM (look in a mirror!):mirror: Also hope you enjoyed how Tim exerted "some newfound dominance" 2 impress his Master Daddy Lex....:muscle: BTW....I had gotten 2/3 thru the story b4 I realized that I hadn't inserted any "addt'l sideline stories" 2 provide "some XXXtra spice":hot_pepper:... SO I created "the Dick/Rico moment" so I could E X P A N D upon it during the next chapter!:sparkler: THANKS 4 ALWAYS being SO SUPA-SUPPORTIVE of this story & being SO POSTIVE w/your comments-- VERY GR8FUL!:pray: P.S. I also have "another curveball idea":baseball: brewing up in my mind that might help Bash out of "his humiliation spiral":cyclone:...SO STAY TUNED!!:radio: Have an AWESOME rest of your Sunday/wknd!:sunglasses:
1/29/23, 9:37 PM
Love this chapter, Jack-- HOT!
1/29/23, 2:58 PM
Hi Jack-- Stumbled upon this riveting 2-part story yesterday/today & am hoping that you will return to (or expand) upon this Theo/Superboy dynamic!!!:smiling_imp: I have to admit there's something to the Theo character that is TRULY powerful/captivating.... especially when he methodically breaks Superboy down into a submissive bitch-- PLUS the whole humiliating collar scenario in Part 2 was absolutely BRILLIANT!!:sparkler: I know that you recently wrote about them in "Not So Super Now"....(which I RAVED about back in December!) but with your masterful writing skills, I'd agree with Essex (comment above) that you when you carefully create/craft these stories (esp. w/the particular Theo & Supes dynamic), you really leave us wanting MORE!!:supervillain: We can ONLY HOPE, right!?!? ENJOY Your Weekend & BRAVO, SIR!!:tada: