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6/23/23, 7:47 PM
omg so hot, though im a little confused on the differences between Alpha and Beta black and white drones?? otherwise this is HOT

6/24/23, 6:41 PM
@[temporaryhotsaucetofu](/user/show/10034005) I guess I envisioned a difference between Alpha and Beta drones. Like the term "alpha" implies, these men are more dominant, assertive and aggressive. In the original story, Dave is more dominant. He lures his boss to the Cum Center. And through his actions, he also ensnares Jake. Jake, on the other hand, is the more passive of the pair. He sits by and allows everything to be done to Dave. And even though he has reservations and suspicions, he really does nothing. He allows situations to continue. I guess I envision dominance and submissiveness being brought into balance. And at the end of Brain Feed, the product of both an Alpha and Beta's dna is harvested into creating the perfect clone. But on the flip-side, I'm sure when a situation calls for it, the Cum Center can also breed a clone from two alphas. Could that have been the clone that was standing guard when Jake followed Dave back to the Cum Center? And then beta-beta clones to create a docile horde of servant drones? I guess though we'll never really know the full machinations of the Cum Centers. But one can imagine.

6/30/23, 1:32 AM
@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) i think then it's cute that Dave and Jake compliment each other, different types of ultimately the same unified drone system :3
6/29/23, 11:07 PM
This was hot!
6/29/23, 9:13 PM
Very hot! Great pov. Nice effects. Loved the top fucking the boy. Too bad he didn't rim him first but the fucking was hot!

6/29/23, 10:29 PM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) Thanks, Heru - glad you liked it. I thought long - and hard - about to rim or not to rim. Ultimately decided to leave it out in case I decided to continue the series. Was originally a one-off I thought up after a Twitter prompt by Charlie Walker on the spiderman theme. And I tweeted the whole story out, too - something I'll never do again. Boy was that a nightmare of cut and paste, lol
6/29/23, 4:22 PM
It is a masterpiece. Thanks. I hope to read much more from you.
Lampshade15
6/29/23, 1:33 PM
I enjoyed this a lot more than I thought I would! Very creative and your exploration of the lore is interesting and adds to the plot without bogging the story down. Clark as a dilf in denial is also really hot, very sexy descriptions!
6/29/23, 9:14 AM
Needs part two. Even if it’s not part of the challenge. The premise is too good to just be a one shot.
Anonymous
6/29/23, 7:46 AM
hottest cop story ever!!!! can't wait for the next chapter.
Trotskisaurus
6/29/23, 5:41 AM
Absolutely love every one of these, where will it end? Entire station reduced to unwilling sex toys? The corrupted cops kicked out of the force and having to live off their new depraved talents? So many hot possibilities.
6/29/23, 3:36 AM
Oh my. Oh wow. Oh my and Oh wow. What a fun and sexy and hot and good story. So good! Love Controller pov. Love dom top pov. Love the line about how he loves his bottoms have big cocks so it wings around It's all amazing. So good! I wonder if he could rim his thrall into bliss. So the thrall knows pleasure is from his ass. This was so good!