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7/1/23, 2:08 PM
This story needs a continuation. Itsvery detailed and so hot. The backstory and world building are great.
7/1/23, 11:06 AM
That was such an enormous pleasure! THANK YOU
Elm
7/1/23, 5:33 AM
Very good! I loved both Clark and Sal!
6/30/23, 5:39 PM
I really loved the entire story and I'm sad that it's over now. So you definitely should do more longer stories. Great writing!!!
6/30/23, 1:45 PM
Your writing is excellent! Great setup!

6/30/23, 2:24 PM
@[Kelly](/user/show/933626) Thank you!!! I published this as a Prologue, next chapters will be steamier 🔥
6/30/23, 9:30 AM
Brilliant, I can't wait to see what the trainers do to poor Lee, LUCKY F**KER!
6/30/23, 9:06 AM
Hey there ! Shame I arrive too late... got me wanting to get back in the game though, hope there will be some more ! If ever, i'm ID 37675... Thanks and best wishes !

6/30/23, 9:13 AM
@[Laszlo-K](/user/show/10013582) Hey, hey! I just assigned you some rewards!
6/30/23, 5:54 AM
Was literally thinking about this series today; pleasant surprise to see a new chapter. Love this story and your writing style and detail is fantastic!
6/30/23, 4:37 AM
Absolutely sensational read.
6/23/23, 7:47 PM
omg so hot, though im a little confused on the differences between Alpha and Beta black and white drones?? otherwise this is HOT

6/24/23, 6:41 PM
@[temporaryhotsaucetofu](/user/show/10034005) I guess I envisioned a difference between Alpha and Beta drones. Like the term "alpha" implies, these men are more dominant, assertive and aggressive. In the original story, Dave is more dominant. He lures his boss to the Cum Center. And through his actions, he also ensnares Jake. Jake, on the other hand, is the more passive of the pair. He sits by and allows everything to be done to Dave. And even though he has reservations and suspicions, he really does nothing. He allows situations to continue. I guess I envision dominance and submissiveness being brought into balance. And at the end of Brain Feed, the product of both an Alpha and Beta's dna is harvested into creating the perfect clone. But on the flip-side, I'm sure when a situation calls for it, the Cum Center can also breed a clone from two alphas. Could that have been the clone that was standing guard when Jake followed Dave back to the Cum Center? And then beta-beta clones to create a docile horde of servant drones? I guess though we'll never really know the full machinations of the Cum Centers. But one can imagine.

6/30/23, 1:32 AM
@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) i think then it's cute that Dave and Jake compliment each other, different types of ultimately the same unified drone system :3