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2/13/23, 4:04 AM
Nice atmosphere, details, and the sensory writing at the end was excellent. A hot little scene that speaks to the desires of many young gays.
Gingcub
2/13/23, 2:42 AM
I would like this world :) would love to read more about it too
Bruce
2/13/23, 2:12 AM
Please reformat this so it is easier to read
2/11/23, 10:39 PM
I like the story wish for a little more push back from May only being in chastity for a very short time, 2 days. If he's able to go to sleep easily without thinking about a release then I feel he wouldn't stand for being talked in the way Oliver did in the end. He did briefly but considering he was with his mom I feel there would have been an issue. Not to mention the tie and hair. This should have been pressed a little more and then he could have played up having a rough day at work to manipulate him even more. Or leave it on a high note for Matt to have Oliver go I need to talk to Kevin for some advice. I feel at this point with how compliant Matt has been he shouldn't need advice.

2/12/23, 4:33 PM
@[nerdysuitedbaby](/user/show/164769) The last part already had a big argument between Matt and Oliver, so I didn't want it to feel repetitive. You should also have in mind that it's been over a month since Oliver started transforming Matt, even if he's only been in chastity for two days, so it makes sense for him to be more compliant at this point. About Oliver not needing advice from Kevin, don't worry, Matt still has a long way to get where Oliver wants him, and Kevin will help in that matter.
2/12/23, 3:43 PM
Wish I was the boy
2/12/23, 3:28 PM
This is a great series. Really well written. I love the way you describe cum and precum in your stories…and apparently alien fluids are just as good!
Anonymous
2/12/23, 7:28 AM
Yeah this one isn’t really horny vibes, kinda just makes me sad
2/12/23, 3:33 AM
I feel like this is a pretty classic way that Dom and sub elements start to really come out. Oh just wear a cage for a little while. Oh yeah now I'm actually in control of you. Truly in control of you.
Anonymous
2/11/23, 9:58 PM
Ugh, the wait for the end is killing me. It’s so hot!!!