Recent Comments

2/17/23, 6:50 AM
Really interesting how Damian's fate unfolds. And also, to ultimately have Stanley state it, that he somehow enjoys subbing for Marcus. And speaking of him, I'm glad he's more likeable in this chapter, than the previous one. You've build and interesting power dynamic between him and Stanley, and I'm very curious to see it develop with Rex in house. Possibly an alpha and a beta slave? If Rex was to join Stanley in chastity they could compete for a chance of unlocking, even if just to be denied either way. Anyhow, nice of Damian to stay to be a more prominent character from now on, he was a fun one when he first appeared.

2/17/23, 6:59 PM
@[Jet313](/user/show/10009595) Thanks for reading! Yeah I really like Damien and I kind of decided right away that he would become a main character. With Marcus people seem to feel kind of hot and cold about.
2/17/23, 6:19 PM
Loved this story!! I hope there is a continuation of Jake’s story!
Feb 17, 2023
Elm
2/17/23, 4:05 PM
There are a lot of things that I like about this story, specially the "read" command. It is a tad noticeable how it wasn't written by a person tough (it reiterates a lot, using the SAME words, instead of different ones for emphasis). Even while English isn't my first language I can tell something is off with the writing. Overall I liked it tough!

2/17/23, 4:23 PM
@[Elm](/user/show/567745) Thanks, Elm! That's really helpful feedback! You're absolutely right, the AI tends to like to use the same phrases verbatim, I have to kinda coax it to not do that with some creative prompting or else manually edit in those nuances. I'll pay closer attention to that when I edit next time! I ninja edited in some minor changes, hopefully it smooths things out a little!
2/17/23, 9:28 AM
Great continuation of series! The original was hot but it's getting hotter
2/17/23, 3:13 AM
i ❤️ Jack Parker
2/4/23, 6:42 AM
It was interesting and cute (one might say) at the same time. And the continuation of the story: "Pup Training for Police" will be?

2/17/23, 12:51 AM
@[Bright Dream🏳️‍🌈](/user/show/10028726) Soon.
Art
2/16/23, 6:37 PM
Great story from you as always! I've saved and reread all of your past stories as you are one of my go to guys! Please keep writing and adding chapters to the great ones you've already shared!
2/16/23, 5:24 PM
That was an amazing chapter. I'm glad you are back. Parts 1, 2, 3... I like where this is going. To infinity ♾ and beyond.
2/16/23, 3:48 PM
Another great one!
2/16/23, 11:30 AM
Better than the last chapter.