Recent Comments

2/19/23, 9:05 PM
Holy shit! This felt like it was written for me. My ultimate fantasy. Whoever wrote this…THANK YOU!
2/19/23, 1:23 PM
love love love, hope for sequel at the compound and new hire?
Tyler
2/19/23, 12:38 PM
@Thycho, I have an idea: Let's introduce a bottom who wants his dick to shrink. However, John would use another type of nanobot that would his cock larger every time he was penetrated by Evan. Evan would have to satisfy him as a bottom in order to get what they want. This way, Evan would have a challenge for his top mindset.
2/18/23, 10:16 PM
really glad you kept the story going, dom bottom stories are so darn rare :3 The water sport element was really hot, love to see the tops crave the bottom so much so to a point that they tries to find inconspicuous ways to get his pee.
2/18/23, 8:58 PM
So glad you came back to this. And that I saw it in my feed!!!
2/18/23, 8:43 PM
This story is SO FREAKING GOOD!! 🤩🤤🥰
Feb 17, 2023
Anonymous
2/18/23, 8:36 PM
I just love this. Great story. Hope you continue it, please!
2/18/23, 12:13 PM
When will the next chapter being coming out?
Feb 17, 2023
2/18/23, 11:07 AM
I'm sorry, but AI generated stories should have no place here. There's no soul or eroticism to it. AI still runs based on biased coding. We're nowhere near it having a presence in creative communities where it won't create harm.
Feb 17, 2023
2/18/23, 3:17 AM
It will be interesting to see how AI writing develops, but it's just not there yet. ChatGPT in particular has been hobbled to prevent it from writing erotic scenarios and dialogue. I'm not sure it's any good at writing fiction at all yet, but it particularly is unable to capture the erotic charge necessary for this type of story. To the author, I would suggest you take what the AI has put out and try to re-write it in your own words, and flesh it out. Add some characterization and flourishes to breathe life into it. That would be more productive than having the AI continue to produce stories like this as a finished product. I understand how frustrating writer's block is. Try to let the AI help you push through it, but don't let it tell your story on its own. It's not up to the task.

2/18/23, 4:47 AM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) I love this feedback