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Muscle-Flex
6/8/25, 5:15 PM
Gone for a week and come back to two new installments! The writing here is really good - really got into the minds of the characters. The threesome was a clever idea and felt completely natural as it evolved. And the ending!!! Hahahaha! Liam's confusion and how he ended up in his situation was hilarious. Oh wait, damn, not another tent in my shorts. Gulp. On to Chapter Seven. There goes the rest of my weekend....

lukas pucci
6/9/25, 1:07 AM
@[Muscle-Flex](/user/show/2059714) liam’s got no idea how he keeps ending up like that either tbh. glad the threesome felt natural—it was hell to write without making it cringe lol enjoy ch 7, it only gets worse from here
6/8/25, 9:54 PM
Re read it twice now

lukas pucci
6/9/25, 1:05 AM
@[M.A.B](/user/show/10063003) dudeee thanks sm
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
6/8/25, 7:41 PM
Hot story. Love what is happening to both of them. Contrary to the other posters, I don't feel bad for Jero. As he comes to accept what he is becoming and his new role in Vennie's life, he will settle in and find it as satisfying, if not more satisfying, to be Vennie's supportive cuck than his equal lover.
Anonymous
6/8/25, 7:04 PM
SO GOOOD!!! I cannot wait for their sex.

lukas pucci
6/8/25, 7:06 PM
@Anonymous lmao soon soon
Anonymous
6/8/25, 10:27 AM
It's a good thing I'm allowed to cum and I did. Can't believe so many chapters and Liam still wasn't fucked yet and hasn't sucked Noah too. Yet it's the hottest story I read. Keep up the good work, man!

lukas pucci
6/8/25, 7:06 PM
@Anonymous Yooooo, when it happens it’ll be amazing! thanks for the comment ❤️
6/8/25, 4:37 PM
Interesting story, you did good
6/8/25, 2:59 PM
Really exceptional writing. I loved it. I'd love to read more of you!
6/8/25, 1:34 PM
It doesn't get much more extreme and disgusting as this. But that was exactly your goal after all. Now I have to clean my brain. Lobotomy sounds like a good idea.
6/7/25, 8:11 PM
This stinks of AI. No writing flow, excessive and repetitive descriptions, no meat.

6/8/25, 1:07 AM
@[gotacoolname](/user/show/234002) My instinct is that this was indeed written with AI assistance, but not because of the flow or because of any possible repetition in the descriptions. So I just mean to say, I agree this was written with AI, but I disagree with these reasons for saying so. There are a lot of non-AI stories that use this kind of structure and flow as well.
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
6/4/25, 10:17 PM
Glad you were able to come back to this. This is damned hot. Full-fledged brainwashing. The victim loses himself completely. The Master controls him completely. It's a shame this is fiction. It would be so damned good to be like Cracker. Or is some of it autobiographical?

Littledickslave@yahoo.com
6/7/25, 4:14 PM
@slavethruhypno@yahoo.com Thank you. My Master worked very hard to change my attitude and view of my life. What I remember about the early days was how intense his reprogramming was. I probably could have resisted more, but it all felt so good and I wanted what he offered me. Yes, this is more autobiographical than not. There is some literary license to help the story flow, but all of the activities are what I remember happening early on. Full disclosure, though, I did not remember most of it until about a year ago when my Master told me to remember and reminded me what was going on then.