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Anonymous
2/27/23, 8:01 AM
hot!!!
2/27/23, 7:12 AM
So good can't wait for next chapter 🍿
Anonymous
2/27/23, 6:51 AM
Very exciting to wake up to a new chapter. Eager to see more from your work again. Hopefully the snort snippets are nicely followable, sometimes I struggle catching the general story when reading them all at once.
2/27/23, 4:31 AM
oh wait a second anyone else kinda disturbed on how Dylan's memory can just be evaporated in an instant o_O

2/27/23, 4:52 AM
@[temporaryhotsaucetofu](/user/show/10034005) m im gonna think about this more
2/27/23, 4:50 AM
Oh man oh man this is so freaking good!! You have me dripping on every word, my stuffed ass pulsing in sympathy, my locked cock flexing in understanding, and my love for latex making me wish wish wish I was one of these characters! 🤩
2/27/23, 3:53 AM
Very, very hot. I hope this series continues.
2/27/23, 3:11 AM
What a great start!!
Anonymous
2/27/23, 12:36 AM
As always your writing is amazing; the narrative structure is well formed and the characters feel like they have personality. I'm looking forward to hearing more about Marcus' plans now he has more of the sarcophagus bags...
2/26/23, 10:47 PM
A very fun and sexy read! Not a lot stories on here with this kind of scenario. Would love to know what the lich gets up to with all those naked adventurers the mimic gives him.
2/26/23, 4:18 AM
Amazing that this is both your first story, and you aren't a native English speaker. I would have guessed neither if you hadn't said. It was hot, vivid, and you gave enough attention to the major kinks of the story (muscles, hair, musk) to be satisfying and horny. This falls under a section of fiction that is either a very long caption or a very short story. With that limitation, the transformation sequence was rather short and didn't include a tremendous amount of details. _This is completely fine._ That being said, lovers of transformation stories would surely appreciate a more detailed transformation sequence as well as more time spent after the transformation so they can live the experience through the transformed character (since imagination is the only way to do this particular kink within reason). Perhaps you'd consider a longer form story for another transformation tale, or expand on this one by letting the readers follow Henry and his roommate to the gym so we can see just what kind of effect his musk has on others, and what kind of sex he likes to have with other people. This was a very good first story!

2/26/23, 9:44 PM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) Thank you so much for such a positive and constructive feedback! As this is my first story preferred to start small but I do have a lot of ideas that would need lengthier stories to fully develop. Seeing how well this first story is being received, I'm getting motivated to expand on the setting and the characters as well, so expect some more soon! Thank you again for your advices!