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2/26/23, 4:18 AM
Amazing that this is both your first story, and you aren't a native English speaker. I would have guessed neither if you hadn't said. It was hot, vivid, and you gave enough attention to the major kinks of the story (muscles, hair, musk) to be satisfying and horny. This falls under a section of fiction that is either a very long caption or a very short story. With that limitation, the transformation sequence was rather short and didn't include a tremendous amount of details. _This is completely fine._ That being said, lovers of transformation stories would surely appreciate a more detailed transformation sequence as well as more time spent after the transformation so they can live the experience through the transformed character (since imagination is the only way to do this particular kink within reason). Perhaps you'd consider a longer form story for another transformation tale, or expand on this one by letting the readers follow Henry and his roommate to the gym so we can see just what kind of effect his musk has on others, and what kind of sex he likes to have with other people. This was a very good first story!

2/26/23, 9:44 PM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) Thank you so much for such a positive and constructive feedback! As this is my first story preferred to start small but I do have a lot of ideas that would need lengthier stories to fully develop. Seeing how well this first story is being received, I'm getting motivated to expand on the setting and the characters as well, so expect some more soon! Thank you again for your advices!
2/26/23, 12:08 PM
Oh this was great. Hit all my notes. Picture was hot. Loved it! Hope we see more where his roommate falls under the power of his scent 🤤

2/26/23, 9:26 PM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Than you very much! I might cook up some ideas about a sequel... :smiling_imp:
2/26/23, 7:10 PM
I really enjoyed this! I’m looking forward to the next chapter so much! Especially, because of the impending foot fetish theme you’ve put in there. This story is making me crave more!
11/14/22, 12:20 PM
I love this story and I would definitely buy a physical book with it. *hint hint*

2/26/23, 3:16 AM
@[Nephilim](/user/show/941196) Sooooo if you go on Amazon. And give “Unleashed Desires” and my name a look up. I have published my first book. It’s an e book for now. And just a collection of some of my short stories. But. Pup training for Police is gonna be the first physical book I release once I get it set up correctly. Stay tuned.
Martin
2/11/23, 9:21 PM
Lovely little story. Are you going to write more about their new relationship?

2/26/23, 3:13 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Probably not. This was a one off gift for a friend.
2/24/23, 8:11 PM
More like a sequel. I'm sorry about Skippy. Hope all is well with him. How about a chapter where Skippy sleeps in Sparky's room again? And can we have a moment where Sparky tells his story about how he first met the Titan and his pack?

2/26/23, 3:13 AM
@[Bright Dream🏳️‍🌈](/user/show/10028726) He has to be a good boy to earn that privilege. And he seems to be acting out a bit so he’s probably lost that privilege for a bit. And I’m gonna sprinkle in the backstories of everyone’s over the course of time. Don’t worry. Everyone’s stories will unfold.
2/19/23, 10:40 PM
Maybe Skippy keeps acting out because he just loves Titan's attention that much (can't blame him).

2/26/23, 3:11 AM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) Hehe it could be. He certainly has become devoted to his alpha in a fairly short time.
2/25/23, 12:27 PM
This is a great start. Chad and Ethan are enjoyable characters. The spellbook means this could go any direction, the plant doesn't even need to remain an important part of the story you could quite literally take this any direction you wish. One thing I will say, because I myself was reminded of this recently, is that you ought not to use tags on a chapter that aren't in that particular chapter. A story will inherit all tags used across the story. So for example, no one was droned in this chapter. Maybe that will happen in a future chapter, but not yet. So save that tag until it's relevant. Great job and look forward to seeing where this one goes after the contest.
2/25/23, 10:37 AM
I really enjoyed this story, so I added it to my favourites. It would be really nice, if you go deeper into the settings, there is so much potential to build a huge world about boys getting turned into drones throughout multiple themes. Also for this story to be a bit more detailed. What is the protagonist feeling seeing all turned into drones, what does the process feeling like, what really happened to his friend… did he maybe even surrendered willingly? So much room for so much greater stories to come, keep it going ;)
Anonymous
2/25/23, 8:42 AM
Pretty hot, though I'd be lying if I said I wasn't hoping for some big locker room orgy(or perhaps out on the pitch?), even if this is more realistic. I do like that the romance theme is still present, will that continue in future chapters? And will we learn more about the drones?