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2/6/23, 3:44 PM
very hot story any new chapters planned?

2/7/23, 7:03 AM
@[Benv](/user/show/115794) Absolutely!
3/2/23, 3:21 AM
Definitely hope you’ll keep exploring this going foreword!
Anonymous
3/2/23, 12:14 AM
Another great chapter! I'm a sucker for porn with a plot, so very excited to hear that this is moving more in that direction. If I could soapbox a bit, I totally get that in the hypno genre generally and with drones specifically, it's a very fine line between too much and too little exposition. Too little and obviously it's difficult to get invested. But I also think a big part, if not the main part of drones' appeal is their inscrutability; the feeling that their motives are totally alien and possibly unknowable(beyond that sexy sexy assimilation of course!), so too much exposition can kind of ruin the magic too. I think it's wise to hew closer to the limited, pre- to during conversion POV as you suggest. But regardless of how you take it, I'm definitely hooked. All of your couples have been really likeable so far, but Ethan and Derek's dynamic is especially heartwarming and I hope they get to go on a big adventure ~~before their inevitable conversion~~
Anonymous
3/1/23, 1:47 PM
do you have a patreon @Neon Demon ?

3/1/23, 3:23 PM
@Anonymous I don't although I've always liked the idea. If I get more into writing and writing consistently, I might, but at the moment I don't think I'm good enough at writing to post frequently enough. Also I don't think I'm that talented enough yet :sweat_smile:

3/1/23, 5:51 PM
@[Neon Demon](/user/show/10023852) You might consider alternatives. Patreon has some pretty severe limitations on allowed content and they jive poorly with the type of stories normally posted here.

3/1/23, 11:44 PM
@[Neon Demon](/user/show/10023852) you are definitely talented enough! and the quality of every story is WAYYY more than enough compared to any quantity
3/1/23, 5:45 PM
So glad you came back to this.

3/1/23, 8:01 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Thanks! The subjects enjoyed it too hehehe.
2/26/23, 11:39 PM
I was going to say that this kind of mimic is somewhat less bad than the normal kind, but the lich finale at the end most likely makes it just as fatal. And if anyone was unaware of what liches do with defeated adventurers, well skeletons and zombies have to come from somewhere, you know.

2/26/23, 11:42 PM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) This is true of normal liches. But. I’ve had an idea in the back of my mind of a lich who uses some of his victims…a bit differently.

2/26/23, 11:45 PM
@[Alpha Artemis](/user/show/1997819) Hah hah hah, well it would make sense if the lich and mimic were cut from the same cloth. :rofl:

2/26/23, 11:48 PM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) I mean. Liches get lonely too. And cum can be a potent ingredient in some potions. And is needed for a number of rituals. And keeping a big strong barbarian naked on a leash as your obedient pet is a great flex. And funny.

2/26/23, 11:52 PM
@[Alpha Artemis](/user/show/1997819) I feel like I missed out in the fact that my D&D years were mostly before I came out and my friends all straight. I think I prefer it gayer.

3/1/23, 5:54 AM
@[Alpha Artemis](/user/show/1997819) Our D&D party (specifically the bard) determined goblin cum was hallucinogenic. We’re now farming goblins and selling their cum to rave goers.
3/1/23, 4:06 AM
Ngl, if this gets published as a book when it’s done, I’m absolutely buying it.
nobody
3/1/23, 3:58 AM
really hot! it left me wanting for more. Please continue!
3/1/23, 3:10 AM
Love the start you have here! Excited to see where it goes. Personally love some underwear/thong stuff if you're interested in that at all. One note on writing I'd recommend is separating some of your larger paragraphs into smaller ones so they are a bit easier to read. But your writing is otherwise very clear and does a great job of bringing the story to life. Looking forward to more!
3/1/23, 1:32 AM
So other than just reading the book I didn’t see how he summoned Asmodeus. But you know? So what? This was just super hot! Hope you continue this.