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nobody
3/1/23, 3:58 AM
really hot! it left me wanting for more. Please continue!
3/1/23, 3:10 AM
Love the start you have here! Excited to see where it goes. Personally love some underwear/thong stuff if you're interested in that at all. One note on writing I'd recommend is separating some of your larger paragraphs into smaller ones so they are a bit easier to read. But your writing is otherwise very clear and does a great job of bringing the story to life. Looking forward to more!
3/1/23, 1:32 AM
So other than just reading the book I didn’t see how he summoned Asmodeus. But you know? So what? This was just super hot! Hope you continue this.
Anonymous
3/1/23, 1:01 AM
cerberus???
Anonymous
3/1/23, 1:00 AM
master can turn me into a puppy drone uwu
2/28/23, 7:43 PM
I gotta wonder how Myriad is going to make Jamie/Rocket Kid the greatest and most powerful superhero in the world? Especially with all the top heroes he's gonna have to contend with.

Anonymous
3/1/23, 12:58 AM
@[Wolfboy77](/user/show/10002587) I hope that Master can change Jamie into a super super SUPER drone =))))))
2/28/23, 7:18 PM
Sorry but this is unreadable. I think you need to find an editor, or if English isn’t your first language, maybe publish in the language your most comfortable with and see if someone can translate.
2/28/23, 5:23 PM
Usually I never comment like this but this was a difficult, almost impossible read.
2/28/23, 3:43 PM
This is so amazing I am just begging you to update it
Anonymous
2/28/23, 6:00 AM
Oh mannn, the way he just accepts Dylan's logic like that...Jamie you ~~silly boy~~ **good drone**...what have you gotten yourself into....And why does it feel like we're getting close to the end??!(please tell me I'm wrong!)