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3/12/23, 11:52 PM
This Story is seriously one of my favourites. It good writing and a great feel to it. Hope you are doing well
3/12/23, 8:35 PM
Will this series continue?
Mindwhisperer
3/12/23, 5:13 PM
Excellent!
Dylan
3/12/23, 4:42 PM
Thx Chris, I like to hear what you think! Lets do a poll: Do you guys rather read about the modeling career or the porn career of Sam?
3/12/23, 4:28 PM
WOW!!! I LOVE this story! Please go on - there must be a sequel! :stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes:
3/12/23, 3:27 PM
So, I was rereading Chapter 2 last night, and took special note that when Jamie is trying to get Luxor to talk, he threatens to tell Astra that Luxor gets off huffing Valour's jock straps. And here we see Luxor actually doing it, when it wasn't something he ever did before. Coincidence? I think not.
3/12/23, 3:04 PM
Maybe the opening of the book was how the demon Asmodeus was released and if Asmodeus is one of the 7 Princes of Hell, that leaves 6 more to be explored ??? I really enjoyed your story and I'm sure there will be more!
3/12/23, 12:36 PM
This is such an amazing read! And I love how this series is evolving and growing with previous stories! This slow and steady and seduction is very well paced. Might I recommend that these power bottoms get put in chastity as part of their means to serve and submit? Help keep them perpetually needy and wanting. Or maybe other gear or 'uniforms' if that doesn't fit with the story?

3/12/23, 12:45 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) School uniforms are a big part of the story coming up.
3/12/23, 10:50 AM
It's a hot story, but does Mark really really love and care for Alex as a person? I really jerked of to this well truly, but dunno.
Feb 10, 2023
3/6/23, 6:41 PM
That's super hot! I love the idea of a foot slave in chastity. And the way you've described every part of this process makes me wish there was more to it, a continuation where the protagonist finally is allowed to worship his masters feet. Oh, to be in his place!

3/12/23, 9:24 AM
@[Jet313](/user/show/10009595) Thank you! This was the first piece of erotic fiction I wrote so I'm glad you enjoyed it. I wrote it a few years ago and have never thought of doing a continuation, but I have a few more ideas in my head I've been meaning to get onto paper so hopefully I'll have something new soon. And who knows, maybe I will go back to this at some point...