Recent Comments

BWW
5/1/23, 10:35 AM
Lol I read part one of this yesterday and I was sooo hoping that it wouldn't be long until two part came available! This story is totally pushing all of my buttons rn and I'm super excited to see where you go with a longer form story !

5/1/23, 11:04 AM
@BWW Hey buddy, thanks for taking the time to comment. I can’t promise that part three will be out as quickly. You know how it is when real life interferes. However, the first third of part three is done ; so, who knows.

BWW
5/1/23, 10:17 PM
@[Cracker](/user/show/10023984) Heh no worries all good things come to those who wait! Very much looking forward to it though - have been getting tired of erotica but your stories - and this one in particular - really get me. The TPE and the breaking of super confident doms to total subs are both extremely hot to me !

5/1/23, 10:58 PM
@BWW Hehe, I agree ... it is so hot see a cocky poser-alpha' downfall from muscle stud to mindfucked slut. There's something about muscle jocks and guys with power, like a cop, that is just begging to be fagged, demoted, and exposed.

5/2/23, 12:15 PM
@[Mr Jack Off](/user/show/2164801) Yeah!
5/2/23, 11:16 AM
Do you still believe that after what is almost ,1.5 year since you last published, you will come up with a new chapter soon? Please don’t let us down !! J.D.
jojo
5/2/23, 9:22 AM
so friggin hot!!! i was imagining donny as russel the whole time

5/2/23, 10:25 AM
@[jojo](/user/show/10036674) Heh I’ve always wanted to be dom’d by a younger dude so I guess that checks out 😜 But seriously thank you for the kind words. I’m glad you enjoyed it so much!
5/2/23, 10:05 AM
I fuckin love this series. This was another very hot addition.
Anonymous
5/2/23, 4:02 AM
I have to say, after hearing about it so much I kinda wish I could visit the Shiny Richard for real :laughing: Even if there wasn't any real sex, the imagery of the drones overtaking the army still did things for me. And now thanks to the hive mind, they're proper soldiers ready to take on the world...it's all falling into place :smiling_imp: Can't wait for the conclusion.
Anonymous
4/28/23, 8:15 PM
Love this story and really looking forward to the next installment. I do hope Lyto continues to appear in obeying his masters orders and finding the recruits so he can get his reward :wink: I also love the setting. Fantasy settings aren't as common as one might think when it comes to hypno stories, with superheroes being a lot more common so it's also great to see this setting, in particular about a paladin who of course is usually the most righteous character.

5/2/23, 3:20 AM
@Anonymous Haha we will just have to see what happens with him 😉 I’m still considering which party member will be next. I have a few ideas… maybe too many to the point where it’s giving me executive distinction disorder. I’m really glad you enjoy the fantasy setting so much. I’m a huge D&D fan/nerd and it’s always been a dream, pun not intended, to get this series off the ground. And there is so much to work with in terms of mind control and other kinks it was too great to pass up!
Brody
4/29/23, 1:34 PM
Great story! Glad you are back.

5/2/23, 3:12 AM
@[Brody](/user/show/10005093) Thank you so much! I love seeing your name in my comments!
5/2/23, 1:04 AM
Another great chapter. Love when a daddy is made. Can't wait to see what else Bill will do next.
5/1/23, 11:54 PM
mmm this definitely deserves a follow-up. I'm curious where the "taking control"aspect will play in: is it "living" rubber that gradually takes him over until there is only 218? will his training involve watching "boring" movies laced with covert brainwashing? is there something in the drinks? :thinking:
Anonymous
4/30/23, 9:07 PM
The mind reading was simple, but effective! Surprised more stories don't use it. The relationship between Erame and Yates, and Yates' conquests provides a layered power dynamic that's also pretty neat.

4/30/23, 10:00 PM
@Anonymous Thank you. I wanted to start Yates abilities off slow with Erame in the wings to push his Seal to do more-he's already hinting at what else Yates can do. The power balance between Erame and Yates as well as Yates corruption (or resisting temptation) is very much planned to be the over arching story.

Anonymous
5/1/23, 12:01 AM
@[sirjocktrainer](/user/show/949652) I tend to prefer stories with corruption over total enslavement, since the push-pull aspect of gaining power at the expense of freedom just gets me going for whatever reason. So I'm definitely looking forward to what happens in this story

5/1/23, 4:14 AM
@Anonymous Well, there will likely be total enslavement as well, just not Yates. But I do hope you enjoy the story as it continues

Anonymous
5/1/23, 7:21 AM
@[sirjocktrainer](/user/show/949652) Oh believe me, I wouldn't be here if I didn't enjoy a good enslavement story too. But that's what's great about the layered setup -- it's the best of both worlds!

5/1/23, 1:04 PM
@Anonymous And both worlds we will have. I am looking forward to writing chapter three.