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3/11/23, 8:22 PM
Super Hot...
3/11/23, 6:09 PM
This Chapter is mostly exposition. As with preceding pieces of exposition in this masterpiece, it raises as many questions as it answers, or more. So: Goliath - he's been a bit player so far, but he is really starting to intrigue me. First, I don't buy that it was a blow from Maelstrom that made him retire, especially since his power allows him to greatly reduce the impact of blows. We also get the Intel that it was Valour who ultimately took down Maelstrom, and between the two, I'd say that Goliath has the stronger powers. So I think that Maelstom blow was just the cover story given to the lesser heroes and the World. I believe Goliath's problem was basically the same as Horizon's and Midnight's, with the addition that he knew more about the extent of the League's corruption, and likely even had taken part in it.. Or maybe, like Midnight, he balked, and left because of irreconcilable differences. And when, precisely did his conversion take place? Given that he's DS-003, it has to be sometime between 2 and 6 years ago. And how willing was he? Minotaur - It was good to get confirmation that Minotaur too is now one of Master's superdrones. It leads me to speculate that the "what he deserved" Dusk refers to is a deliberate betrayal by Midnight/Dusk that led directly to his capture and dronification. This could also go into the level of trust between Master and Dusk. It is also a very fitting response to what Midnight could only have seen as a betrayal of both good and himself personally by his mentor. DT-X and DH-X - the revelation that some, probably all, types of drone have a head drone is a neat insight into the structure and hierarchy of Master's organization. Is there a separate DS-X, or is that Master? Onyx - his role of bringing in new drones is very interesting, and I'm looking forward to seeing him at work. Given Horizon's ability to teleport latex onto someone, I imagine he could be a lot of help with this. Then there's Onyx being such a brat. He seems to have more leeway in how he treats and interacts with Master than any other drone. But it also appears that this is only because Master enjoys it. Luxor - how will Master's targeting of him proceed, and will it succeed? Given that he can burn away latex on his body, he's going to have to be caught unawares when it goes on, either asleep or knocked out. And what was up with his uncharacteristic huffing of Valour's jock? It almost certainly has something to do with his latex speck. My guess is that it was a test by Master to see if he could exert influence over Luxor through that speck of latex. More to come, but this is enough for now.
3/11/23, 4:13 PM
Awesome story! I can't wait for the next chapter. Personally, I hope Jack retains his smooth, young appearance as he becomes a hot leather/rubber stud. I think its incredibly hot to see a cute boyish looking guy who's a cocky leather/rubber Master. Thank you for sharing your great work!
Theorizing Wizard
3/11/23, 2:46 PM
Master is honestly a lot better than the League, perhaps he does deserve to rule the city after all…
3/11/23, 1:05 PM
Wow, yes. Would also like to read a story set in this reality. Pictures were very hot too.
3/11/23, 11:52 AM
I found the characters adorable, though at some point the straight label literally loses any possible meaning here ;-)
Super big fan
3/11/23, 7:41 AM
I love the story!! Please write more on Midnight if possible please
Martin
3/10/23, 9:50 PM
The story is much better to read now, thank you for the update!

3/11/23, 6:05 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thats Grat also thanks you wor keep waiting i hope you all enjoy the story :D
paul
3/11/23, 5:20 AM
I love how this whole series is a little different, each one sparking an interest in different perversions. For me, each chapter is speaking to me, depending on how I'm feeling that day, but this chapter has really got me going (several times now). Please keep up the good writing. πŸ˜πŸ˜‰πŸ˜Š
sokarat
3/11/23, 4:21 AM
I love this interlude, um I do have a question of what happens with the puppy drones? and im confused so when Dylan was a worker drone was he just collared or was he covered