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6/8/25, 2:59 PM
Really exceptional writing. I loved it. I'd love to read more of you!
6/8/25, 1:34 PM
It doesn't get much more extreme and disgusting as this. But that was exactly your goal after all. Now I have to clean my brain. Lobotomy sounds like a good idea.
6/7/25, 8:11 PM
This stinks of AI. No writing flow, excessive and repetitive descriptions, no meat.

6/8/25, 1:07 AM
@[gotacoolname](/user/show/234002) My instinct is that this was indeed written with AI assistance, but not because of the flow or because of any possible repetition in the descriptions. So I just mean to say, I agree this was written with AI, but I disagree with these reasons for saying so. There are a lot of non-AI stories that use this kind of structure and flow as well.
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
6/4/25, 10:17 PM
Glad you were able to come back to this. This is damned hot. Full-fledged brainwashing. The victim loses himself completely. The Master controls him completely. It's a shame this is fiction. It would be so damned good to be like Cracker. Or is some of it autobiographical?

Littledickslave@yahoo.com
6/7/25, 4:14 PM
@slavethruhypno@yahoo.com Thank you. My Master worked very hard to change my attitude and view of my life. What I remember about the early days was how intense his reprogramming was. I probably could have resisted more, but it all felt so good and I wanted what he offered me. Yes, this is more autobiographical than not. There is some literary license to help the story flow, but all of the activities are what I remember happening early on. Full disclosure, though, I did not remember most of it until about a year ago when my Master told me to remember and reminded me what was going on then.
6/7/25, 2:42 AM
Oh my! Seems like we have a critic here of Trump's "short term pain, long term gain" economy, a step improved from his "on day one" election promises.
6/7/25, 1:52 AM
WOW I AM EDGED

lukas pucci
6/7/25, 1:53 AM
@[PedroH599](/user/show/10062428) just like liam dude
Hansel
6/6/25, 5:38 PM
oh my! So so dark. That last line is the _killer_!
6/4/25, 3:25 PM
This is a pretty good story with a nice, slow, unwinding submission plot. I look forward if thereโ€™s a sequel.๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ‘

6/6/25, 1:09 AM
@[Kyle Cicero](/user/show/10023983) There is a pending story that explains Matt Kane's background before arriving in West Virginia.
Anonymous
6/5/25, 6:32 PM
Very nice! If you don't mind me asking what model do you use to help write?

6/6/25, 1:07 AM
@Anonymous I used ChatGPT to make the pictures. I also used ChatGPT to make suggestions to keep the voice and tense consistent. It is all my writing and ideas but with recommendations for improvement in those areas.
6/2/25, 4:53 AM
What a mindfuck ๐Ÿ˜Š

lukas pucci
6/2/25, 5:55 PM
@[M.A.B](/user/show/10063003) glad u like it mannn

Anonymous
6/5/25, 9:28 PM
@[M.A.B](/user/show/10063003) It is a mind fuck and I want to be Liam so bad