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4/4/23, 10:37 AM
the pup headspace he's falling into is so fucking hot! thank you so much for continuing to update this story, i love seeing the new chapters
4/4/23, 5:49 AM
This was sensational.
Ash
4/4/23, 5:35 AM
Absolutely amazing climax (both literary and physically) to a fantastic series. Can’t wait to read what happens next! You are an amazing writer with great ideas. This series is exactly the kind of story I was looking for when I first got on this site. I definitely agree that there aren’t enough dumb jock stories on this site, which is why I started writing my own stories here. And thank you so much for the shoutout! I’ll have to dedicate a future chapter of SEXTREME just for you! May I suggest a double penetration scene and/or an accidental sex scene in public (either hidden or caught). Maybe Theo can take his jock(s) on a trip where they get “stuck” again? Maybe a visit to a certain gym? :wink:
dmc
4/4/23, 1:44 AM
Hot, awesome start
M_S
4/3/23, 7:50 PM
I'm aware you mean this story directly as presented, but I can't help but keep reading it with the context of 'what if they're not dumb, and just amusing themselves with it as a cover, while the MC's ....enthusiasm....is something they're controlling him into having.', y'know, the 'control the person who thinks they're in control' trope. Mainly because -wow- the level of dumb. But thanks for writing!

4/4/23, 1:29 AM
@[M_S](/user/show/2659890) Haha I had that thought too. Like what if they're both just RPing with the bottom. I mean what if it's all a set up? It's just good fun ridiculous hyper fucking.
Anonymous
4/3/23, 6:53 PM
Damn, ive been edging for three hours and it was so explosive. My god, thank you so much for this story dude.
4/3/23, 3:59 PM
HOT story, and very well written. I love your ideas and your writing style! You definitely have the 'accidental' sex scenes nailed, haha. I'd love to see Theo become even more of a twink, leaning toward a femboy style. I can imagine the three of them going to the mall for sports gear and wandering by a sexy panty display in Victoria's Secret so Theo comes home with his first (of many) panties. Or maybe when Theo's birthday comes around, Jon and Teddy each give him some jewelry that will require him to get his ears and navel pierced, maybe his tongue, too. I'm sure whatever you write will be awesome. Can't wait to read more!!
4/3/23, 3:34 PM
Second reading of this awesome chapter, great imagination & writing. Look forward to the next.
4/3/23, 3:09 PM
The end is cute and twisted at the same time which is kinda my thing
Anonymous
4/2/23, 9:21 PM
I'm sorry if I'm a downer, but this is textbook abusive relationship. Manipulating your partner with emotional and physical tricks and then saying "he could have chose not to" is distorting the truth. In the previous chapter we are told that Matt doesn't argue because he wants the yelling to stop. Oliver "accepting" his new role is Oliver rationalizing and finding justifications for manipulating someone that loves him and that he should love back. I really hope Matt will get his escape.

4/2/23, 11:08 PM
@Anonymous I'm sorry this was not what you expected, but I mean, the title of this story is "From boyfriend to butler". I think that might give you the hint that this won't be a perfectly healthy equal relationship 😅

Anonymous
4/3/23, 3:01 PM
@[formalboy](/user/show/10030609) Yeah, that's fair. I just don't like stories where the bad guys win and in my defense I was very tired last night which made me very emotional. Sorry if I got to harsh or took the wind out of your sails...