Recent Comments

4/6/23, 10:04 PM
Thank you so much for the story!! I'm loving it so far and already looking forward for more - it's odd but there's not a lot of stories that feature like proper, believable hypnosis. It's always so exciting when one does appear! Liked your style of writing too!
4/6/23, 7:58 PM
hope Max becomes a real regular
4/6/23, 5:37 PM
I like the slow start pacing of the story. Make the character's personality gradually changes was quite the delight. I wonder if you are going for the mindless route or the semi-aware conscious trance. I personally think that it was great if the target perceived what seemed to be abnormal or strange behavior, to be a normal, everyday routine. Retain their personality, but change their perceptions to whatever the hypnotist felt like doing.
4/6/23, 3:19 PM
Enjoyed this one hope there will be more chapters in the future.

Kip
4/6/23, 4:52 PM
@[JustMeCMH66](/user/show/10002441) I agree! Did Max drive back to the frat house, in only his compression shorts?
Anonymous
4/6/23, 7:28 AM
Ah, the eleventh chapter's title, it tells me how the story will end. Also, you mentioned there's three chapters left. Is the last chapter same as epilogue?

4/6/23, 8:33 AM
@Anonymous Glad one of us knows how the story will end lmao. Do you have a theory?

Anonymous
4/6/23, 1:58 PM
@[Kyle Cage](/user/show/1756274) My theory is that in the end of the chapter, Ethan and Derek become the King of Rubber together. Since the title says "Kings" insteads of "King". Maybe in chapter 10, there's something unexpected happened when Todd was enslaving the military with his drones army. For example, Ethan (If he is still himself) took his chances to save his boyfriend, Derek (if he is enslaved), and gain the knowledge of how to defeat Todd. From there, they succeeded and enslave Todd in the final chapter.

4/6/23, 2:06 PM
@Anonymous Definitely better than todd deserves.

Anonymous
4/6/23, 2:18 PM
@[Kyle Cage](/user/show/1756274) I wonder if that is how the story will end? When you mentioned three chapters in your reply with BlindSeer0, I was confused because you mentioned two chapters title only, and the second last chapter is a finale of the series. Maybe that third chapter is a what-if chapter of what will happen if Todd couldn't be stopped by Ethan and Derek? (If the previous reply is indeed true, of course)
4/6/23, 12:03 PM
A really good story! Would love to see you write more jps stories. :)
4/6/23, 1:01 AM
This is so good in so many ways. Transforming a pop star into a dom is fascinating. When Justin straddled Connor's chest...it was like I could feel the submission! I eagerly await the next chapter, and I hope one chapter will explore how "Mutt" got that nickname!
Anonymous
4/6/23, 12:59 AM
_Yessss_ field orgy :heart_eyes: I believe you when you say you had fun with this; the plot (and the action) has steadily been heating up over the course of this series, and it's nigh-on scorching now! The characters are really coming into their own now that we've seen them in multiple episodes. If I didn't want Todd to go down before, I definitely do now. Still...the prospect of seeing the army overrun by drones as they begin their march toward global conquest is tantalizing too. A tough dilemma. Good thing it's not up to me to figure out how to wrap all of this up :hugs:
Anonymous
4/5/23, 10:53 PM
Are the purple drones Noah and Danial?
4/5/23, 4:29 PM
Waiting to see what happens when the military go in. Will they be any match for the drones, or will they just further swell the rubbered ranks?:black_heart:

4/5/23, 10:50 PM
@[U.K. guy](/user/show/1944978) Tune in next time to find out.