Recent Comments

4/7/23, 8:24 PM
fantastic with real believable characters!
4/7/23, 7:57 PM
Loved the new chapter I agree with the cage comment and lack of sex. Not doing it has to have sex but I feel the subject should come up. Like Matt has feelings that he's been doing as he's told and doing all this to please Oliver but Oliver says he likes it but he doesn't seem to feel like he finds him attractive as they haven't made love in a while. You could get away with manipulating so sex doesn't happen but he is very affectionate. Maybe the size "15" shirts are one of the ways he romances him but maybe showing some effection.
Anonymous
4/7/23, 10:18 AM
This is amazing! I can't wait for more!
4/7/23, 6:18 AM
I can already see that this kind of story will hook me. It's quite my style. I already liked the characters, especially the hypnotist, who is not a complete psychopath. And if the name of the story wasn't "Meeting Max", I would want Eric and other athletes hypnotized too. Fuck it, I have a jock sweet tooth, XD!
4/7/23, 5:14 AM
Love this story so much, the gradual and increasing control 🤤 I only hope there is more attention paid to Matt adjusting to his cage, surely he must be getting uncomfortably horny? 😁
4/7/23, 4:29 AM
Very excited for where this is going. One of the best examples of POV writing I've seen in a while, too. The characters' internal monologues feel recognizably different and help establish who they are. I'm definitely getting horny for Max right along with Jacob, nice teasing ;)
4/7/23, 4:11 AM
I've read this several times now, cannot wait for the next one!
4/7/23, 2:54 AM
This checks a lot of boxes. Slow burn. Characters I can get invested in. Great hypnosis. Really looking forward to the next chapter.
4/7/23, 1:42 AM
I hope this isn’t over it’s great! Love the way you have written a brat getting put in his place.
4/6/23, 11:16 PM
Ooh yeah, this is hot and sexy. I don't know where things will go in the future - some of the tags might lead to directions I don't often go in fiction - but the writing and the characters and the set up here is supremely hot and sexy and fun to read and very enjoyable. Also I like the two pov's in one story - fun stuff seeing both perspectives, especially as the hypnosis is from the dom's. I hope that Max becomes a good boy subby bottom for dom top Jacob, hehe. Big sub, small top is hot! I also like how Jacob is helping Max with his classes and I hope that continues - like thanks to his new sir Max does really well in sports and academics and stuff. Maybe Max can also have some of his frat buddies and team bros get some hypnosis too. hehe Yeah fun and sexy chapter!