Recent Comments

9/2/23, 5:58 PM
I'm delighted to see you continue this storyline. It's a refreshing take on the genre and full of anticipation and potential. Can't wait to read the next installment.

9/2/23, 6:00 PM
@[Marcus](/user/show/454905) Hopefully coming sooner than the last part. 😊
9/2/23, 4:56 AM
I'm a sucker for process-focused changes and control, so this was a real delight! I'm so glad I finally had the chance to read it.

9/2/23, 6:00 PM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) Glad you liked it!
Whiteypa
9/2/23, 4:52 PM
Always love when Superman's brain is transformed by a hypnotist! Hope to hear more of what happens to the flying boy scout!
9/2/23, 4:24 PM
Nice intro. Assuming there's a str8togay element to the conditioning, it will be interesting to see whether it has a different impact on Kyle.
9/1/23, 6:58 PM
This is such a good opening chapter! I love the creepy vibe with the transformed David, and you do a great job of quickly sketching out James and Kyle's relationship. Looking forward to Part 2!

supersean
9/1/23, 8:54 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) Wow thank you so much! It's my first story on here and I had a lot of fun writing it. Chapter 2 should be coming out soon!

9/2/23, 4:15 PM
@[supersean](/user/show/10009193) Can I volunteer next please
9/2/23, 4:04 PM
Great start, looking forward to more!
9/2/23, 2:13 PM
I hope for more erotic, kinky, pervy, wicked hot chapters! Perhaps some details about what the hypnotist has done to superman's brain in medical terms. For whatever reason, I LOVE LOVE superman stories where he is captured, conquered and converted, but with details on what the "villain" to make him this way. medical talk/terms in discussing superman's just turns me on...
Anonymous
9/2/23, 7:49 AM
I thought this story was excellent. I'm a novice writer (working on a few fantasy short stories at the moment, with the eventual goal of going into more kinkier stuff once I become a bit more experienced) and from my pov your writing is excellent. Seriously -- hats off dude.
9/2/23, 7:07 AM
Yep this is a great. More please.
Willie Cici
9/2/23, 2:31 AM
I can't wait for the next chapter. Great start!