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5/22/23, 9:18 PM
Man, this is one of the best humiliation stories I've ever read, it's very VERY HOT. The descriptions, the dialogues, all work so well on this one. I'm working and can't fully enjoy it, I can't wait to go back home to read it again, along with the first chapter. It's deliriously hot, thanks for bring the new chapter this fast, I'll be waiting for the third part!!

5/26/23, 8:22 PM
@[Plymouth58](/user/show/1353762) Ay thanks man glad ya like, I could say the same about your Green Lantern story, one of my favorites on here. Nothing hotter than a goody two shoes Hero or Cop being humiliated and taken down a notch.
5/26/23, 6:29 PM
Really hot ending!
5/26/23, 6:09 PM
Well paced and fun story!
Lampshade15
5/26/23, 3:13 PM
I've really enjoyed this story! The subject matter really resonated with me and it was wonderfully written as always. Super hot!
5/26/23, 2:24 PM
I really enjoyed the story. Your writing is excellent, and your portrayal of jocks needing to feel superior ( no matter by what means) is spot on. Can't wait to read about reactions and results of Brotein "injections" on the rest of the team...
5/26/23, 1:54 PM
This was a great story! I like stories where the ass hole get what they deserve, and in Rayne's case the pun is very much intended. I admit I already read the story on your website (otherwise I would've commented here on the previous chapters as well). I couldn't wait to finish it. Well done!
5/26/23, 1:35 PM
i really enjoy this story ... and, i am so hopeful that the brotein will make one of the men want to kiss him! ...
5/26/23, 11:22 AM
Thanks for your prompt detailed response. I would hope this great story goes on forever. There are so many options to keep it going.

5/26/23, 11:57 AM
@[br6205](/user/show/10027864) Aw, thank you! This story is based on a roleplay that I did late last year, so the story is concluded unfortunately. I’ve done a few roleplays over the years and often save them into word documents. They are really epic ta tales, but I never really considered creating longer stories out of them, but with people liking Downfall of an alpha, I may have to look at converting another one into a storymay
5/26/23, 3:26 AM
Great chapter, but you should be more careful with the scene descriptions. A strange thing that happened in your story was Alex carrying Max from the kitchen to the bedroom. Unless their dorm room is 5 miles away, it's impossible for Alex to take this long to get to the room carrying Max, especially with Alex being so strong. And the passage of time is more evident with the many orders that Max gives Alex while they are walking.

5/26/23, 11:04 AM
@[Sexcrab](/user/show/10027159) Thank you really much for your feedback. Indeed, these 3 chapters are the first I wrote some time ago. I decided to put them as an introduction to what's on Chapter 4, which is much longer and more more detailed and rich in descriptions.
5/26/23, 6:10 AM
Callum former best buddy of Jake is broken & a slave fuck pup of Billy. I see Jake's future different from poor Callum. I am hoping Jake will be permanently attached to Matt in some kind a relationship more that just as his slave. That it will involve a certain degree of affection and Jake will get to fully accept perhaps even like his role as a bottom. Is there any validity in this. By the way I love the story. Do you have any pictures as to what the various players look like.

5/26/23, 10:25 AM
@[br6205](/user/show/10027864) I like this line of thinking. Matt has proven to be a lot more nicer and genuine than most men that Jake has encountered. I think that’s because with him being a slave, maybe even a bit unwilling at first, he gets that the life of a slave will be hard for someone like Jake. He not understands Jake, but maybe on some level, he may even like Jake, or at least he likes training him…hehe In regards to pics. Because, I post these pics on my BDSMLR blog and twitter, I have a pic to go along with each chapter. A picture of Jake can be found on my first chapter (https://slaveboyjg.bdsmlr.com/post/582325701) I kinda love him, haha. There is one for Matt in chapter three and Benji in chapter 5 and Bill in chapter 18. Now in hindsight, I woukd chane the pic of Matt. To what, I don’t know, but I hope thi helps!

Anonymous
5/26/23, 10:33 AM
@[SlaveBoyJG](/user/show/10017787) Why don't you add those images to the stories here on GKS/GCS as well? They'd look nice here!

5/26/23, 10:53 AM
@Anonymous Well, I started this a little before I started posting on this site. Mainly because I was a little unsure if this story would get approved as it flirts with the idea of chloroform and other extreme stuff. When I uploaded the first chapter, I automatically assumed it wouldn’t get approved, but I was pleasantly surprised when it was, and because the first chapter didn’t have a pic, I just went ahead without pics. Maybe, once the story is concluded, I may go back and add the pics. Either way, when I do future stories, I will add the pics to this site.