Recent Comments

6/4/23, 12:54 PM
I really hope you continue writing. This is a great first chapter!
6/3/23, 10:46 PM
I am glad to be wrong. This is way better. Instead of being clever to use the hunt to his advantage, Matt aimed too high. Seems Master Gabe and Billy are going to have more direct influence on training Jake. That's going to be one hell of a ride.

6/4/23, 10:07 AM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) It was only natural for Jake to meet the man pulling the strings behind the curtain. Now Jake’s going to have to deal with the Master’s wrath
5/30/23, 6:45 AM
So given the amount of feedback I’m getting sounds like this was not a popular avenue. So I’m working on a rewrite and will post it here soon. Thanks for your thoughts and opinions everyone. Although a few of you may wanna go ask a trans person how they feel about that particular word. In the states where I’m from it’s a very not okay thing to say to a trans person and just about everyone knows they shouldn’t use it. However given the context of this chapter and how things have been going yes, Skippy did not mean it maliciously it was just the only real word he knew and it slipped out, and this would be an overreaction on Titans part. So. Rewrite incoming soon.

5/30/23, 12:24 PM
@[Alpha Artemis](/user/show/1997819) Thank you for showing such a respect for your readership and our reactions to your work. i appreciate you for hearing us, thank you for taking our concerns for the story seriously, but i wonder if a rewrite is necessary. All characters are able to have flaws. Titan CAN make mistakes, this could be one, this chapter doesn't have to be rewritten, but it can be a showcase that Titan is just as human as anyone and he can show humility and compassion by apologizing and promising to be a better alpha to the whole pack including Skippy next time. You wrote a fantastic chapter that totally flows with what these characters WOULD DO in this situation. i absolutely stand by your original work as you have it posted. even if it makes me upset, i repeat what i said earlier, it just means that you wrote EXCELLENT characters that make us feel real empathy. I once again advocate that This chapter can stand as it does, and we can use it to build bonds between skippy where he sees that Titan, big, strong alpha himself, can be sorry. can apologize. can ask, even beg forgiveness, and be NO LESS a strong alpha for it. Show skippy how to be a better man even when at fault, while gathering him in closer to the pack. You wrote an excellent chapter, and popular or not stories are about strife and overcoming said strife, i believe that you have written an EXCELLENT conflict that these characters can overcome together. and regardless of if it causes setbacks in skippy or not, that is still more obstacles for the characters to overcome, which i see as wonderful. your decision is of course your own, and i will respect it and gleefully welcome any and all chapters you post. i just hope that our feedback hasn't caused you any upset. Thank you for such an amazing story Artemis.

5/30/23, 8:20 PM
@[Alpha Artemis](/user/show/1997819) I completely agree with @[Mind Labyrinth](/user/show/910312). I acknowledge that my reaction is effected by living in a country in which you will never hear this term. Not knowing the full severity of this word have probably made me more forgiving than a reader from an English speaking country, which hurt the idea you were trying to pass. However, Mind Labyrinth had put it excellently. Asking for forgiveness is not weakness and learning so would do great for Skippy. Also, Learning that even Titan is still human might bring them more close together. He won't be the strict, all knowing mastermind anymore. Instead he would be a loving fatherly human being who wants the best for his pack and will do anything for them, which is far greater.

Anonymous
5/31/23, 2:16 AM
@[Mind Labyrinth](/user/show/910312) I agree with your point. @Alpha Artemis I'm sorry if my comments made you feel uncomfortable, I appreciate your vision and creativity, it's what Mind Labyrinth say. I won't say more, in order to not make you feel unconfortable, pal, sorry.

5/31/23, 3:29 AM
@Anonymous O no your fine. I appreciate the feedback. I really do. It’s making me think a lot.

5/31/23, 3:38 AM
@[Alpha Artemis](/user/show/1997819) Eh, Titan went overboard without investigating the situation but people _do_ do that. I'd just roll with it and have Titan cool off a bit, think it over, and apologize for punishing without knowing what the circumstances were. That's what a good parent would do anyway. The bad ones, of course, are always "right" no matter what and their children are gaslit and terrorized into accepting they were at fault no matter what. Obviously Skippy isn't a child but he is being regressed by this family so they'll have to take that into account.

Hazard0707
6/3/23, 5:03 PM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) I agree. Instead of rewriting just continue with a cool down.
6/3/23, 4:40 PM
Wow! Just found this story. It's incredible. Didn't realize this type of premise would be so hot!! Cannot wait to see what happens next. Thank you Elmara for introducing me to the world of dumb jocks :)
6/3/23, 5:10 AM
Not me, found the image online.Have asked around but no one know where it is from.
6/2/23, 10:52 PM
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Anonymous
6/2/23, 10:14 PM
Woah Leo Todrius’ META series! Haven’t finished reading but hopefully Dr Julian appears :3
6/2/23, 9:42 PM
I really love this story and its chapters. The comments on this chapters are also very interesting. I agree with the fact that Titan is going too far and also agree that rewriting it is not necessary. As it has been pointed out, people make mistakes, especially fictive ones. The way I see it, Skippy received a homophobic and transphobic upbringing, by his family and/or society. He doesn't know better. Yet. I think he will get better with help from the pack. He already is getting better. Alpha Artemis : Thanks for writing this story. It is one of my favorite. (And thanks for recurring reminder of who is who, I tend to get lost when there are too many characters.)
Anonymous
6/2/23, 12:08 PM
Can’t wait for the next chapter! I wonder what Dexter will do to Brad and also to Chad and Brads father who’ll come back with changed sons.
6/2/23, 3:09 AM
I'd love to join rob as one of brutes slaves