Recent Comments

4/21/23, 4:07 AM
This chapter was really intense and I mean it in a good way. The sexual tension between the characters were as thick as it was enjoyable. As an admirer of jocks, I loved how they were used as a catalyst for them to open to each other. The time you spent building up the characters were well-spent. I'm looking forward to seeing use of the bondage tag and learning about who is the dom!
4/20/23, 7:48 PM
Great stuff so far. I love the age difference dynamic. Looking forward to more!!

Pete
4/20/23, 8:31 PM
@[Tommy B](/user/show/10022728) Thanks Tommy. Chapter 2 just got published, 3 and 4 are pending approval and I'll submit 4-8 later this week. Feel free to share comments, good or bad. Pete

Martin
4/20/23, 10:55 PM
@[Pete](/user/show/10036314) I recommend slowing down publishing the chapters a bit. Remember that your series is bumped back to the top of the list each time a new chapter is published. Also consider that people reading your story with their dick out might not be that... patient to read a huge amount of text :)

Anonymous
4/21/23, 1:18 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Martin, thank you for the tip. I haven't used this site to read stories before, so didn't realize the impact publishing too frequently could have. What would you recommend? The story has 8 chapters and I think I've published 3 so far. The remainder are ready to go. Are you thinking one new one every 3-4 days? Or longer? Thanks, Pete
4/20/23, 10:57 PM
Another great chapter, Sir! Wish I could trade places with Ben!
Anonymous
4/20/23, 4:08 PM
Amazing start! Can't wait for more. Really loving the slow burn.

Pete
4/20/23, 8:32 PM
@Anonymous Thanks Anon. Chapter 2 got published today, 3 and 4 are pending approval and I'm submitting 4-8 later this week. Look forward to your comments. Pete
4/20/23, 5:50 PM
Never know if authors want to take the reader's ideas and build or just stick with their initial plot and outline. If it's a good story that piques my interest then I picture myself in the situation and what I would do or who I would do. Still reading the series. Maybe my thoughts will allow you to expand. Give the story another little twist and maybe even a tug or two. Thanks for sharing this.
4/20/23, 12:23 PM
Wow. Those are great ideas! I posted all the chapters at once, but it took the admin a few days to review them. Maybe I should have written one chapter at a time so I could've changed direction based on feedback.... oh well. Glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for the feedback.
4/19/23, 9:27 PM
I love how this story is progressing!

4/20/23, 12:20 PM
@[ohiobuck47](/user/show/694479) This is the first story (of any sort) I've written, so thanks for the feedback.
4/19/23, 9:31 PM
Just read the first 3 stories in this series. Thanks for the hard on you got me dripping. My mind is wandering if Kevin is the evil genius behind all the sexy fun. Did John never really exist? Did he hijack Jack in order to create John to turn his boss. Did Kevin meet Jack in a bar and was he rejected or used and discarded? The possibilities are endless in this world. Maybe John did exist and his muscles were a result of his first night under Kevin's control... Please continue my cock is wanting to get into a bottom of this mystery.
4/17/23, 6:07 PM
That was strange but fun. You’ve really developed as a writer and there was some genuine comedy in this. Well done!

4/17/23, 7:06 PM
@[Ruffcub](/user/show/21211) Thank you!