Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/20/23, 4:08 PM
Amazing start! Can't wait for more. Really loving the slow burn.

Pete
4/20/23, 8:32 PM
@Anonymous Thanks Anon. Chapter 2 got published today, 3 and 4 are pending approval and I'm submitting 4-8 later this week. Look forward to your comments. Pete
4/20/23, 5:50 PM
Never know if authors want to take the reader's ideas and build or just stick with their initial plot and outline. If it's a good story that piques my interest then I picture myself in the situation and what I would do or who I would do. Still reading the series. Maybe my thoughts will allow you to expand. Give the story another little twist and maybe even a tug or two. Thanks for sharing this.
4/20/23, 12:23 PM
Wow. Those are great ideas! I posted all the chapters at once, but it took the admin a few days to review them. Maybe I should have written one chapter at a time so I could've changed direction based on feedback.... oh well. Glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for the feedback.
4/19/23, 9:27 PM
I love how this story is progressing!

4/20/23, 12:20 PM
@[ohiobuck47](/user/show/694479) This is the first story (of any sort) I've written, so thanks for the feedback.
4/19/23, 9:31 PM
Just read the first 3 stories in this series. Thanks for the hard on you got me dripping. My mind is wandering if Kevin is the evil genius behind all the sexy fun. Did John never really exist? Did he hijack Jack in order to create John to turn his boss. Did Kevin meet Jack in a bar and was he rejected or used and discarded? The possibilities are endless in this world. Maybe John did exist and his muscles were a result of his first night under Kevin's control... Please continue my cock is wanting to get into a bottom of this mystery.
4/17/23, 6:07 PM
That was strange but fun. You’ve really developed as a writer and there was some genuine comedy in this. Well done!

4/17/23, 7:06 PM
@[Ruffcub](/user/show/21211) Thank you!
Anonymous
4/16/23, 8:28 AM
This opened a brand new fetish for me. I have the biggest desire to be made into a perfect cube now.

4/17/23, 8:52 AM
@Anonymous Must become perfect cube. Me perfect cube. You perfect cube as well?

Anonymous
4/17/23, 3:23 PM
@[grrside](/user/show/10021051) Me cube... Me perfect cube...
4/16/23, 11:17 AM
This part is pretty cute. I'm really looking forward to the sequel. I especially like how Skippy and Sparky spend time together. By the way, I have a questions for this fanfic if I may ask: 1. Why is Sparky an adult baby for Titan and his pack? 2. It seems that in one part it was said that he goes to school. What school does he go to? 3. Do all the characters in all parts wear dog masks or do they sometimes take them off? 4. I didn't quite understand Sparky's age and what he looks like. Can you describe it to me in detail? Or show a picture if possible? 5. Tinan, Bright, Oak, Nyx, Sparky, Ruby, Skippy. What do these names mean? I have nothing against. Just wondering. 6. Do the rest of the pack have the same bad backstories as Nix and Skippy?

4/16/23, 1:46 PM
@[Bright Dream🏳️‍🌈](/user/show/10028726) 1. That’s just his fetish. We will explore his backstory soon enough. 2. I never really specify simply because I don’t wanna draw an accidental parallel to a real school. Just like how it’s briefly mentioned Titan is a history professor but I’m likely never gonna give a name. 3. They go off and on. I will try and specify when. Sparky has his on fairly frequently and is not allowed to take it off. 4. Sparky is about about 5’6 and weighs around 160. He’s very trim but has some minor muscle definition. He is fairly hairless from the neck down just naturally like some guys are and shaves around his crotch and pits. He had a tattoo on his left leg that’s a reproduction of a drawing he made. I’ll go more into it later. As a general rule of thumb I don’t describe a characters skin color or racial heritage so readers can insert whatever they want the characters to be. For instance in my head Titan is a very tall caucasian/African American man. With short cut, black/brown hair and a decent pelt of chest hair. And a big dick. To others he could be a tall muscular white dude. Or middle eastern. Unless I’m writing about a specific person I know or have a design in mind for I tend to avoid finer details like skin color and such outside of minor things like hair or eye color, and that’s only for scene setting. 5. Nothing lol. I just liked them and felt they kinda fit haha. No ulterior motive. Pup names are what you want. For a while I considered naming them all after gems or minerals and having the pack name be something geology themed. 6. Well not quite. Those are just the most impactful. Hearing “la la I had a wonderful childhood and everything was peachy” does not really add much to character development or story progress. Everyone has their demons. And those will be explored. Nyx is probably the worst we will get into (probably unless I have a really good idea…which I might). Hope that helped.

4/17/23, 5:08 AM
@[Alpha Artemis](/user/show/1997819) Thanks for answering. I was just curious. To be honest, I like your puppy play and diaper fanfics.
4/17/23, 4:56 AM
What a great story so far. Jerked to every chapter. Hope the next Sir is a fat and hairy trucker hehe. Love it.
4/16/23, 10:05 PM
Great story mate! Congrats.