Recent Comments

4/21/23, 7:24 PM
This series was very well thought out. I enjoyed all 9 chapters immensely. Entirely hot and held the reader's interest--especially those into gay male leather sex. Thank you for writing this, and I hope to see more of your work in the future.

4/21/23, 11:25 PM
@[ohiobuck47](/user/show/694479) Thank you very much! I enjoyed writing this story so it's nice to hear someone else enjoyed reading it.
4/21/23, 12:19 PM
I might just be imagining it, but i like that this is Jackie, not Jack, and that his personality still shines through the dom persona John is giving him.
4/21/23, 4:07 AM
This chapter was really intense and I mean it in a good way. The sexual tension between the characters were as thick as it was enjoyable. As an admirer of jocks, I loved how they were used as a catalyst for them to open to each other. The time you spent building up the characters were well-spent. I'm looking forward to seeing use of the bondage tag and learning about who is the dom!
4/20/23, 7:48 PM
Great stuff so far. I love the age difference dynamic. Looking forward to more!!

Pete
4/20/23, 8:31 PM
@[Tommy B](/user/show/10022728) Thanks Tommy. Chapter 2 just got published, 3 and 4 are pending approval and I'll submit 4-8 later this week. Feel free to share comments, good or bad. Pete

Martin
4/20/23, 10:55 PM
@[Pete](/user/show/10036314) I recommend slowing down publishing the chapters a bit. Remember that your series is bumped back to the top of the list each time a new chapter is published. Also consider that people reading your story with their dick out might not be that... patient to read a huge amount of text :)

Anonymous
4/21/23, 1:18 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Martin, thank you for the tip. I haven't used this site to read stories before, so didn't realize the impact publishing too frequently could have. What would you recommend? The story has 8 chapters and I think I've published 3 so far. The remainder are ready to go. Are you thinking one new one every 3-4 days? Or longer? Thanks, Pete
4/20/23, 10:57 PM
Another great chapter, Sir! Wish I could trade places with Ben!
Anonymous
4/20/23, 4:08 PM
Amazing start! Can't wait for more. Really loving the slow burn.

Pete
4/20/23, 8:32 PM
@Anonymous Thanks Anon. Chapter 2 got published today, 3 and 4 are pending approval and I'm submitting 4-8 later this week. Look forward to your comments. Pete
4/20/23, 5:50 PM
Never know if authors want to take the reader's ideas and build or just stick with their initial plot and outline. If it's a good story that piques my interest then I picture myself in the situation and what I would do or who I would do. Still reading the series. Maybe my thoughts will allow you to expand. Give the story another little twist and maybe even a tug or two. Thanks for sharing this.
4/20/23, 12:23 PM
Wow. Those are great ideas! I posted all the chapters at once, but it took the admin a few days to review them. Maybe I should have written one chapter at a time so I could've changed direction based on feedback.... oh well. Glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for the feedback.
4/19/23, 9:27 PM
I love how this story is progressing!

4/20/23, 12:20 PM
@[ohiobuck47](/user/show/694479) This is the first story (of any sort) I've written, so thanks for the feedback.