Recent Comments

4/22/23, 9:19 PM
This was a fun, clever, and kind of romantic story. "Leviticus" was an interesting concept, and the way it effected both of them, Bryan much more obviously the first time, and subtly the second, made for a neat contrast. Part of me is wondering if the story even needed the final chapter to explain what happened, like it waters it down knowing the answer to the mystery. All in all, a great job.

4/23/23, 1:21 AM
@[BlindSeer0](/user/show/381024) Originally, I didn't have the last chapter, but a fan (my husband) insisted it was needed. I was happy to write it for him. He now wants a story about Ate.

4/23/23, 2:56 AM
@[Touko](/user/show/10036273) Definitely support a story about Ate.
4/22/23, 11:39 PM
The suspense is killing me! I'm eager for the next chapter!
4/21/23, 8:10 PM
Excellent start.

4/22/23, 11:40 AM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Thank you :grinning:
4/3/23, 7:23 PM
This was great and ended in the only way it reasonably could have. I never knew I’d missed the ending to this series. Glad someone commented to lead me back here.

4/22/23, 3:16 AM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) I'm so glad you were able to rediscover it and got to read the ending. I'm doubly glad that the ending resonated with you and felt like it worked for the series! Thanks for taking the time to tell me what you thought!
4/22/23, 1:17 AM
A lovely start ! Waiting to read the rest soon
4/21/23, 7:24 PM
This series was very well thought out. I enjoyed all 9 chapters immensely. Entirely hot and held the reader's interest--especially those into gay male leather sex. Thank you for writing this, and I hope to see more of your work in the future.

4/21/23, 11:25 PM
@[ohiobuck47](/user/show/694479) Thank you very much! I enjoyed writing this story so it's nice to hear someone else enjoyed reading it.
4/21/23, 12:19 PM
I might just be imagining it, but i like that this is Jackie, not Jack, and that his personality still shines through the dom persona John is giving him.
4/21/23, 4:07 AM
This chapter was really intense and I mean it in a good way. The sexual tension between the characters were as thick as it was enjoyable. As an admirer of jocks, I loved how they were used as a catalyst for them to open to each other. The time you spent building up the characters were well-spent. I'm looking forward to seeing use of the bondage tag and learning about who is the dom!
4/20/23, 7:48 PM
Great stuff so far. I love the age difference dynamic. Looking forward to more!!

Pete
4/20/23, 8:31 PM
@[Tommy B](/user/show/10022728) Thanks Tommy. Chapter 2 just got published, 3 and 4 are pending approval and I'll submit 4-8 later this week. Feel free to share comments, good or bad. Pete

Martin
4/20/23, 10:55 PM
@[Pete](/user/show/10036314) I recommend slowing down publishing the chapters a bit. Remember that your series is bumped back to the top of the list each time a new chapter is published. Also consider that people reading your story with their dick out might not be that... patient to read a huge amount of text :)

Anonymous
4/21/23, 1:18 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Martin, thank you for the tip. I haven't used this site to read stories before, so didn't realize the impact publishing too frequently could have. What would you recommend? The story has 8 chapters and I think I've published 3 so far. The remainder are ready to go. Are you thinking one new one every 3-4 days? Or longer? Thanks, Pete
4/20/23, 10:57 PM
Another great chapter, Sir! Wish I could trade places with Ben!