Recent Comments

Joe
5/1/23, 10:24 AM
Oh yes, Dude! Wolfie is now nearly through the bitching process. The cop stud just needs to suck and swallow and then be bred by his new Black Master. The white ex-alpha pretty boi cop has finally revealed his true inner bitch and it was glorious. After J is finished with wolfie, Kevin must take over cunting and slutting out his new partner. Literally putting the black shaft of might rammed into his pussy'd partner's holes. During and in-Between shifts. Another thing is between Kevin and wolfie, they need to bring more luscious and lascivious white stud -cops, military, gym bunnies, etc- to Master J to train up properly for other Black alpha men. I love the jockstrap stuff. Could you include more of that, plus add in Speedo racer briefs, and more tight uniform action? It'd be ace if you could have Master J slit Wolfie's tight uniform pants right over where his cop cunt is, then pop the once alpha cop's that while he's in full uniform. Thus signifying that wolfie is now a 100% bitched cop whore.

5/1/23, 11:03 AM
@Joe Wow. Well, I’m glad you’re enjoying the story. I can’t promise. All that stuff is going to be in there or even if any is going to be in there still, I hope you like the third and final conclusion when it’s finished.
5/1/23, 5:33 AM
Excellent again!

5/1/23, 8:46 AM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Thanks
5/1/23, 7:40 AM
Excited to see the finale! And hoping Eli and Ethan have a happy and pleasurable conversion, savoring the process.
5/1/23, 7:34 AM
i dont want it to end but im excited and anticipating the next chapter :hot_face: :woozy_face: is there a way to set up alerts for new chapters being released on here? *edit* never mind.. i can "subscribe" to the series but apparently that means a paid membership
5/1/23, 4:28 AM
So good, and really looking forward to more. 😈 Is Yates an SO3 in your imagination, or something higher? Given his newness to the team and his insecurities I imagine he's not yet reached First Class, and has probably cross rated, eh?

5/1/23, 4:56 AM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) Good to know more people are looking forward to more. As for Yates' rank, I did a few web searches and found that ranks for Seals span E-3 to E-9 so I picked something near the bottom but not the very bottom which is why he's Petty Officer Yates. (The idea of calling him Seamen Yates was temping but....) Beyond that I couldn't decided if I wanted him third class or second so I didn't decide and have just called him Petty Officer. I'm not sure when or if it will come up but I'll deal with it as it does. As for cross rated, I had to look that up and no, I have not given that any thought so it won't likely come up.
4/30/23, 10:26 AM
Good read, though I'm confused about the p-word at the end. Is this male/male or trans/male? If the latter, it's not tagged as such.

4/30/23, 11:34 AM
@[lavallama](/user/show/10033321) Male/male. My whole thing is calling men’s assholes ‘pussy’.
4/29/23, 5:15 PM
Is this a preview?

4/29/23, 5:40 PM
@[Notsolong](/user/show/10036757) Yes and no 😃 I wrote it as a stand-alone story, but now it seems likely it will be the spine of the next novella after Control.
Kippers
4/29/23, 4:34 AM
You had me at "nauseated." How many writers do we have to suffer through, who don't know they're nauseous? Then you paraphrased Nietzsche! I haven't even gotten to the sex yet, and I have such an intelligent erection, I had to zoom on down here to tell you I want to bend over for you! LOL Well, I'd better keep reading before you impregnate me. Especially since I'm 95% top!

Throne
4/29/23, 3:16 PM
@Kippers Hello, Kippers. As far as nauseous vs nauseated, I defer to the site Grammarly. They point out that, 'in everyday modern usage', the two words can both be used the way I used nauseated. In formal situations, your rule would apply, but I prefer to keep my tone more informal. As far as the Nietzsche reference, it gets employed a lot and I thought it was appropriate for the mindset of a character who I saw as a bit of an intellectual snob, but with him neglecting to remember the word 'gaze'. Hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
4/29/23, 1:48 PM
A bit confused by Erame / Eros name or identity switch

4/29/23, 3:11 PM
@[Morph](/user/show/919635) as it should be given it's a typo, why it only happened for that small chuck I can only blame late night writing and speak to text not saying names very well. But it has been fixed, thanks for letting me know.
4/29/23, 4:47 AM
Loved the chapter. You are a great storyteller. What comes next ? Sammy seems to be in charge. Does anyone tell Sammy “no”!