Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/30/23, 9:07 PM
The mind reading was simple, but effective! Surprised more stories don't use it. The relationship between Erame and Yates, and Yates' conquests provides a layered power dynamic that's also pretty neat.

4/30/23, 10:00 PM
@Anonymous Thank you. I wanted to start Yates abilities off slow with Erame in the wings to push his Seal to do more-he's already hinting at what else Yates can do. The power balance between Erame and Yates as well as Yates corruption (or resisting temptation) is very much planned to be the over arching story.

Anonymous
5/1/23, 12:01 AM
@[sirjocktrainer](/user/show/949652) I tend to prefer stories with corruption over total enslavement, since the push-pull aspect of gaining power at the expense of freedom just gets me going for whatever reason. So I'm definitely looking forward to what happens in this story

5/1/23, 4:14 AM
@Anonymous Well, there will likely be total enslavement as well, just not Yates. But I do hope you enjoy the story as it continues

Anonymous
5/1/23, 7:21 AM
@[sirjocktrainer](/user/show/949652) Oh believe me, I wouldn't be here if I didn't enjoy a good enslavement story too. But that's what's great about the layered setup -- it's the best of both worlds!

5/1/23, 1:04 PM
@Anonymous And both worlds we will have. I am looking forward to writing chapter three.
Joe
5/1/23, 10:24 AM
Oh yes, Dude! Wolfie is now nearly through the bitching process. The cop stud just needs to suck and swallow and then be bred by his new Black Master. The white ex-alpha pretty boi cop has finally revealed his true inner bitch and it was glorious. After J is finished with wolfie, Kevin must take over cunting and slutting out his new partner. Literally putting the black shaft of might rammed into his pussy'd partner's holes. During and in-Between shifts. Another thing is between Kevin and wolfie, they need to bring more luscious and lascivious white stud -cops, military, gym bunnies, etc- to Master J to train up properly for other Black alpha men. I love the jockstrap stuff. Could you include more of that, plus add in Speedo racer briefs, and more tight uniform action? It'd be ace if you could have Master J slit Wolfie's tight uniform pants right over where his cop cunt is, then pop the once alpha cop's that while he's in full uniform. Thus signifying that wolfie is now a 100% bitched cop whore.

5/1/23, 11:03 AM
@Joe Wow. Well, I’m glad you’re enjoying the story. I can’t promise. All that stuff is going to be in there or even if any is going to be in there still, I hope you like the third and final conclusion when it’s finished.
5/1/23, 5:33 AM
Excellent again!

5/1/23, 8:46 AM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Thanks
5/1/23, 7:40 AM
Excited to see the finale! And hoping Eli and Ethan have a happy and pleasurable conversion, savoring the process.
5/1/23, 7:34 AM
i dont want it to end but im excited and anticipating the next chapter :hot_face: :woozy_face: is there a way to set up alerts for new chapters being released on here? *edit* never mind.. i can "subscribe" to the series but apparently that means a paid membership
5/1/23, 4:28 AM
So good, and really looking forward to more. 😈 Is Yates an SO3 in your imagination, or something higher? Given his newness to the team and his insecurities I imagine he's not yet reached First Class, and has probably cross rated, eh?

5/1/23, 4:56 AM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) Good to know more people are looking forward to more. As for Yates' rank, I did a few web searches and found that ranks for Seals span E-3 to E-9 so I picked something near the bottom but not the very bottom which is why he's Petty Officer Yates. (The idea of calling him Seamen Yates was temping but....) Beyond that I couldn't decided if I wanted him third class or second so I didn't decide and have just called him Petty Officer. I'm not sure when or if it will come up but I'll deal with it as it does. As for cross rated, I had to look that up and no, I have not given that any thought so it won't likely come up.
4/30/23, 10:26 AM
Good read, though I'm confused about the p-word at the end. Is this male/male or trans/male? If the latter, it's not tagged as such.

4/30/23, 11:34 AM
@[lavallama](/user/show/10033321) Male/male. My whole thing is calling men’s assholes ‘pussy’.
4/29/23, 5:15 PM
Is this a preview?

4/29/23, 5:40 PM
@[Notsolong](/user/show/10036757) Yes and no 😃 I wrote it as a stand-alone story, but now it seems likely it will be the spine of the next novella after Control.
Kippers
4/29/23, 4:34 AM
You had me at "nauseated." How many writers do we have to suffer through, who don't know they're nauseous? Then you paraphrased Nietzsche! I haven't even gotten to the sex yet, and I have such an intelligent erection, I had to zoom on down here to tell you I want to bend over for you! LOL Well, I'd better keep reading before you impregnate me. Especially since I'm 95% top!

Throne
4/29/23, 3:16 PM
@Kippers Hello, Kippers. As far as nauseous vs nauseated, I defer to the site Grammarly. They point out that, 'in everyday modern usage', the two words can both be used the way I used nauseated. In formal situations, your rule would apply, but I prefer to keep my tone more informal. As far as the Nietzsche reference, it gets employed a lot and I thought it was appropriate for the mindset of a character who I saw as a bit of an intellectual snob, but with him neglecting to remember the word 'gaze'. Hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
4/29/23, 1:48 PM
A bit confused by Erame / Eros name or identity switch

4/29/23, 3:11 PM
@[Morph](/user/show/919635) as it should be given it's a typo, why it only happened for that small chuck I can only blame late night writing and speak to text not saying names very well. But it has been fixed, thanks for letting me know.