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5/1/23, 4:28 AM
So good, and really looking forward to more. 😈 Is Yates an SO3 in your imagination, or something higher? Given his newness to the team and his insecurities I imagine he's not yet reached First Class, and has probably cross rated, eh?

5/1/23, 4:56 AM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) Good to know more people are looking forward to more. As for Yates' rank, I did a few web searches and found that ranks for Seals span E-3 to E-9 so I picked something near the bottom but not the very bottom which is why he's Petty Officer Yates. (The idea of calling him Seamen Yates was temping but....) Beyond that I couldn't decided if I wanted him third class or second so I didn't decide and have just called him Petty Officer. I'm not sure when or if it will come up but I'll deal with it as it does. As for cross rated, I had to look that up and no, I have not given that any thought so it won't likely come up.
4/30/23, 10:26 AM
Good read, though I'm confused about the p-word at the end. Is this male/male or trans/male? If the latter, it's not tagged as such.

4/30/23, 11:34 AM
@[lavallama](/user/show/10033321) Male/male. My whole thing is calling men’s assholes ‘pussy’.
4/29/23, 5:15 PM
Is this a preview?

4/29/23, 5:40 PM
@[Notsolong](/user/show/10036757) Yes and no 😃 I wrote it as a stand-alone story, but now it seems likely it will be the spine of the next novella after Control.
Kippers
4/29/23, 4:34 AM
You had me at "nauseated." How many writers do we have to suffer through, who don't know they're nauseous? Then you paraphrased Nietzsche! I haven't even gotten to the sex yet, and I have such an intelligent erection, I had to zoom on down here to tell you I want to bend over for you! LOL Well, I'd better keep reading before you impregnate me. Especially since I'm 95% top!

Throne
4/29/23, 3:16 PM
@Kippers Hello, Kippers. As far as nauseous vs nauseated, I defer to the site Grammarly. They point out that, 'in everyday modern usage', the two words can both be used the way I used nauseated. In formal situations, your rule would apply, but I prefer to keep my tone more informal. As far as the Nietzsche reference, it gets employed a lot and I thought it was appropriate for the mindset of a character who I saw as a bit of an intellectual snob, but with him neglecting to remember the word 'gaze'. Hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
4/29/23, 1:48 PM
A bit confused by Erame / Eros name or identity switch

4/29/23, 3:11 PM
@[Morph](/user/show/919635) as it should be given it's a typo, why it only happened for that small chuck I can only blame late night writing and speak to text not saying names very well. But it has been fixed, thanks for letting me know.
4/29/23, 4:47 AM
Loved the chapter. You are a great storyteller. What comes next ? Sammy seems to be in charge. Does anyone tell Sammy “no”!
4/28/23, 6:11 PM
That was excellent

4/28/23, 6:21 PM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Hey thanks, man
4/27/23, 5:43 PM
Honestly i think i am into a kinder form of service with significant but not total power exchange. I can't decide whether i hate this story more than Nico hates his Master. But like Nico's confused feelings about his Master and his new life, i am confused about how aroused your story makes me feel. The idea of your story with its total power exchange captures my imagination, draws me in, and excites me as much as it scares me. I love your descriptions of Nico's emotional reactions to his Master's cunning rantings and His keen understanding of how His one-sided conversations manipulates Nico's mental state. I am both happy and confused about your ending the story at that point, but excited that you have written many more stories. I am off to read more of your work. I think i perhaps i need to thank you for such an enthralling story, but not sure whether it implies an admission. Would it indicate i may have taken a step closer to my acceding to a deeper and deeper power exchange?

4/27/23, 7:41 PM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) I’m glad my story is able to connect with you. So glad you enjoyed!
4/27/23, 9:47 AM
tell me this wasn't the ending! there has to be more right?

4/27/23, 9:50 AM
@[musclejunky](/user/show/10019676) There sure is, mate.
Sebastián Apollo
4/27/23, 2:40 AM
Wonderful work, Charlie! Definitely a change, though a good one, from your typical JPS works! I especially appreciated the twist at the end - both of Jack's hung nature and Ethan being an Alpha-Omega. It seems the two were meant to be, and I'm looking forward to see where this goes. Keep it up!