Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/28/23, 8:15 PM
Love this story and really looking forward to the next installment. I do hope Lyto continues to appear in obeying his masters orders and finding the recruits so he can get his reward :wink: I also love the setting. Fantasy settings aren't as common as one might think when it comes to hypno stories, with superheroes being a lot more common so it's also great to see this setting, in particular about a paladin who of course is usually the most righteous character.

5/2/23, 3:20 AM
@Anonymous Haha we will just have to see what happens with him 😉 I’m still considering which party member will be next. I have a few ideas… maybe too many to the point where it’s giving me executive distinction disorder. I’m really glad you enjoy the fantasy setting so much. I’m a huge D&D fan/nerd and it’s always been a dream, pun not intended, to get this series off the ground. And there is so much to work with in terms of mind control and other kinks it was too great to pass up!
Brody
4/29/23, 1:34 PM
Great story! Glad you are back.

5/2/23, 3:12 AM
@[Brody](/user/show/10005093) Thank you so much! I love seeing your name in my comments!
5/2/23, 1:04 AM
Another great chapter. Love when a daddy is made. Can't wait to see what else Bill will do next.
5/1/23, 11:54 PM
mmm this definitely deserves a follow-up. I'm curious where the "taking control"aspect will play in: is it "living" rubber that gradually takes him over until there is only 218? will his training involve watching "boring" movies laced with covert brainwashing? is there something in the drinks? :thinking:
Anonymous
4/30/23, 9:07 PM
The mind reading was simple, but effective! Surprised more stories don't use it. The relationship between Erame and Yates, and Yates' conquests provides a layered power dynamic that's also pretty neat.

4/30/23, 10:00 PM
@Anonymous Thank you. I wanted to start Yates abilities off slow with Erame in the wings to push his Seal to do more-he's already hinting at what else Yates can do. The power balance between Erame and Yates as well as Yates corruption (or resisting temptation) is very much planned to be the over arching story.

Anonymous
5/1/23, 12:01 AM
@[sirjocktrainer](/user/show/949652) I tend to prefer stories with corruption over total enslavement, since the push-pull aspect of gaining power at the expense of freedom just gets me going for whatever reason. So I'm definitely looking forward to what happens in this story

5/1/23, 4:14 AM
@Anonymous Well, there will likely be total enslavement as well, just not Yates. But I do hope you enjoy the story as it continues

Anonymous
5/1/23, 7:21 AM
@[sirjocktrainer](/user/show/949652) Oh believe me, I wouldn't be here if I didn't enjoy a good enslavement story too. But that's what's great about the layered setup -- it's the best of both worlds!

5/1/23, 1:04 PM
@Anonymous And both worlds we will have. I am looking forward to writing chapter three.
Joe
5/1/23, 10:24 AM
Oh yes, Dude! Wolfie is now nearly through the bitching process. The cop stud just needs to suck and swallow and then be bred by his new Black Master. The white ex-alpha pretty boi cop has finally revealed his true inner bitch and it was glorious. After J is finished with wolfie, Kevin must take over cunting and slutting out his new partner. Literally putting the black shaft of might rammed into his pussy'd partner's holes. During and in-Between shifts. Another thing is between Kevin and wolfie, they need to bring more luscious and lascivious white stud -cops, military, gym bunnies, etc- to Master J to train up properly for other Black alpha men. I love the jockstrap stuff. Could you include more of that, plus add in Speedo racer briefs, and more tight uniform action? It'd be ace if you could have Master J slit Wolfie's tight uniform pants right over where his cop cunt is, then pop the once alpha cop's that while he's in full uniform. Thus signifying that wolfie is now a 100% bitched cop whore.

5/1/23, 11:03 AM
@Joe Wow. Well, I’m glad you’re enjoying the story. I can’t promise. All that stuff is going to be in there or even if any is going to be in there still, I hope you like the third and final conclusion when it’s finished.
5/1/23, 5:33 AM
Excellent again!

5/1/23, 8:46 AM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Thanks
5/1/23, 7:40 AM
Excited to see the finale! And hoping Eli and Ethan have a happy and pleasurable conversion, savoring the process.
5/1/23, 7:34 AM
i dont want it to end but im excited and anticipating the next chapter :hot_face: :woozy_face: is there a way to set up alerts for new chapters being released on here? *edit* never mind.. i can "subscribe" to the series but apparently that means a paid membership
5/1/23, 4:28 AM
So good, and really looking forward to more. 😈 Is Yates an SO3 in your imagination, or something higher? Given his newness to the team and his insecurities I imagine he's not yet reached First Class, and has probably cross rated, eh?

5/1/23, 4:56 AM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) Good to know more people are looking forward to more. As for Yates' rank, I did a few web searches and found that ranks for Seals span E-3 to E-9 so I picked something near the bottom but not the very bottom which is why he's Petty Officer Yates. (The idea of calling him Seamen Yates was temping but....) Beyond that I couldn't decided if I wanted him third class or second so I didn't decide and have just called him Petty Officer. I'm not sure when or if it will come up but I'll deal with it as it does. As for cross rated, I had to look that up and no, I have not given that any thought so it won't likely come up.