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johnlee88888888@yahoo.com
5/10/23, 10:43 AM
Super exciting story, quite a turn on!
5/10/23, 8:53 AM
Shrink his cock and make him a bottom. :)
littledickslave@yahoo.com
5/7/23, 9:06 PM
Wow! I graduated from Cal Poly Pomona just like Mac in the story and I lived in Anaheim Hills, right next to Mac's Yorba Linda! How cool!

Martin
5/10/23, 5:19 AM
@[Local](/user/show/10031217) There are DMs, just make sure to register with the Forum at least once (which can be done by clicking on the "Forum" icon, the rest is done automatically). And you might want to check if there's anything new on the forum for you from time to time.
5/10/23, 1:38 AM
Oh this is excellent, looking forward to seeing it continued. Great job with the set up and hypnosis in this story and the very hot Max.
5/9/23, 9:41 PM
I actually thought this was the best installment of the series. While you've been careful to detail exactly why we should dislike Mac up to this point you have kind of glossed over just how loathsome the Dougs and various other characters are. Doug getting dropped on his fat ass made the story up to this point worthwhile. The main Doug is such an overconfident troglodyte that I hate to see him win, no matter how many negative character tropes are loaded onto Mac, I'd rather see him grow than see him remain under Doug's thumb.
5/9/23, 5:42 PM
I'm a fan, i love this story, i didn't Know how you would continue the story since the third episode was different from the first two. This one seemed to me the weakest of the four, i think because it was shorter or you were going very fast or because of all the exposure you did. Please continue this saga, maybe you should expand the universe since i would like to see more of Eli and Camille's eccentric friends and see if they also use Mac/Auggie (or whatever our protagonist is called) or if they make their own tops, or the neighbors of the dougs or the other corporative bottoms at Apollobiotech creating submissive/service tops, it would be nice to see our protagonist interact with other tops, maybe have other points of view. Since the pills and drugs used here affect sexual performance and suggestion and don't seem to have an effect on muscles, will we see any flirting with steroids?
5/9/23, 8:23 PM
This is turning into an excellent series! Really hoping he continues to move on to other jocks.
5/9/23, 5:36 AM
Esplendid! This chapter was better written than first. It was possible to see well the personality Chad had and what he will have in the next chapters. I really want to see the next chapters.
sturm611
5/9/23, 1:42 AM
Fuck, i would have killed for someone like Uncle John was I was Jackie/Jack's age. The fact that it's his uncle makes it even hotter. Looking forward to see where this is headed.
5/8/23, 3:45 AM
Haha. I think foolish boy Matt mistaking "imprison for life" with "saved from prison". I suspect he was mean to be sent to Gabe in the first place. Serving in a real prison, he would have a serving term; after that he would be freed to start anew. In Gabe's not-prison, there is no term and no duration - a life imprisonment. The politican may have wanted to get rid of him forever so he was sent to Gabe's own prison, and all the hijacking thing was just an act. Afterall, a simple warden cannot do human trafficking for so long without getting caught; he need to have friends somewhere higher up, the likes like the politicans.

Martin
5/8/23, 6:34 AM
@[StalkerInTheShadow](/user/show/10009319) On the other hand, being enslaved to Gabe might be a lot more desirable to Matt than being imprisoned. And there is a chance that he'll actually be "promoted" to handler, when Gabe gets tired of having him as a slave. But it's all a pure fantasy anyway, and should be treated that way, so I don't think it's too helpful to overthink everything :)

5/8/23, 12:39 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) I simply want to raise awareness. It's one of of the way to help the characters (as well as ourselves) dealing with mind-fucking, afterall, in case a hypnotist or a forked-tongue manipulator decides to take a jump on us :) I kid you not, "I'm doing you a favor by exploiting you" is a recurrent theme among authoritarian-related works, and it can happen in non-fantasy world too. A co-worker making you do the works they were hired and paid for in their stead while having the attitude "I'm doing you favor by letting you doing my works so you can improve your skills" can totally happen. Yes? We can let ourselves be exploited sometimes but we should be aware of that.

5/8/23, 2:36 PM
@[StalkerInTheShadow](/user/show/10009319) Hm, huh….you do have a point. This Master Gabe sounds like a right, manipulative. Cunning, bastard, huh? A masterful manipulator…a legendary puppeteer pulling the strings, right? Always lurking in the shadows…plotting his next calculated move. Ask me again in a few chapters time and I’d be happy to discuss more about Gabe! Really

5/8/23, 5:32 PM
@[SlaveBoyJG](/user/show/10017787) A cunning bastard manipulator. Yes. But I wouldn't say it require him to be a grandmaster of all evils ^^ Exploiters can be anyone. Jake is also an exploiter himself, "you must have like it if you're boning up while I'm doing so, you must be a faggot" - all deceitful.