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Anonymous
11/25/25, 1:21 AM
Nooooo not this ending, fuck you Dauntless!

11/25/25, 2:49 AM
@Anonymous I'm pretty sure it's not the ending, just another truly evil cliffhanger.
11/25/25, 1:07 AM
This is so good. All of the hinting about the crack in the damn from the previous few chapters has finally led up to this. We also get the reveal of dauntless, after so much build up. I can't wait to see what happens next. I am deeply worried for Dusk and Jamie though.
11/24/25, 10:17 PM
This story is great! You did an excellent job. I can't wait to see how Josh changes
11/24/25, 8:11 PM
praevenus@poroton.me napisz
11/24/25, 7:19 PM
Lord and Master. This is Mark from Cuntruction. This was amazing. So glad to see you back. Please continue to this story. Please. Turn him into a muscled working man slut. Please
11/24/25, 5:14 PM
What an _incredible_ start, whew. I'm very eager for what's to come!!
11/23/25, 1:21 PM
It would be nice to have you.
11/23/25, 1:21 PM
Cool.
11/17/25, 10:57 PM
Hot story, but it's tough to root for rapists. I hope Drew and Travis get revenge.

11/21/25, 3:06 AM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) I agree with you)

11/21/25, 4:18 PM
@[amul](/user/show/10003734) chapter 3 will be also dark but only spoiler I can give is chapter 4 will be named " rise and fall of the idiots " which will be about ramirez's and o'malley's back story , their games and where they end up and how they end up there . for the studio I am planing to take them down eventually but I think this story will be 10 chapters so before the dawn there will be some more darkness . new marines , new events , threats , obedience , defiance and sun rise .

11/22/25, 9:44 PM
@[Hypnoboy-7](/user/show/10055892) Thanks for shedding light on where this story is going! I look forward to seeing how it unfolds.